So some conversation in hangouts what seems like ages ago is why I was reading your story without waiting for all of it to come out first (a habit of mine, I prefer to binge read). That conversation was related to this chapter. I am pleased to say its all been great and I can't wait to read more! My favorite part:
With a tender smile, she brushed some hair from his still chilly forehead. “By helping him, how many lives can I say I will touch?”
“Wow,” she said. “That’s . . . wow.”
Profound.
And I love how upfront Lois is with being willing to answer his questions. Can't wait to read more!