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FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four #286964 04/25/20 04:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Final chapter! Comments are welcome. Last edited by Morgana; 04/25/20 08:38 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four Morgana #286981 04/26/20 04:31 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Great ending to this tale! What a unique take. Loved how Aykira with help from our favorite time traveler changed Lex's life. The epilogue is especially pleasing with the headlines and the stories' first paragraphs, especially the last one. Well done! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Empire Chapter Four of Four Morgana #287034 05/02/20 07:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Cuidadora Quote Great ending to this tale! What a unique take. Loved how Aykira with help from our favorite time traveler changed Lex's life. The epilogue is especially pleasing with the headlines and the stories' first paragraphs, especially the last one. Well done! clap clap Thanks Cuidadora! Your comment was much appreciated! It was time for Lex and Aykira to get together in the alternative universe without Lex being ill or Aykira bearing a grudge. Writing the epilogue in this way got the point across without writing additional chapters. It was neat to see that Aykira's relationship with Lois had grown to the point where the young reporter was the Maid of Honor at the Luthor/Milan wedding. Talk about a twist! The last headline was the absolute best way to wrap up the story. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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