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Comments are very welcome and go here. Final chapter is here.

That - was marvelous. I acknowledge your mastery of reader incentives (chapter cliffhangers) and angst.

That twist at the end of the best date either one has ever had was cruel, but it was also perfect. You gave us waffs and then you almost followed it with a wham . You have earned a place on the Board of Evil Writers. It's a select membership.

This cannot be your only contribution. It's just too wonderful. The tone, the immediacy, the tension, the fear, it all came through and whacked the reader about the heart and shoulders. I would be very surprised if this tale were not nominated for a Kerth in the spring.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

I am honored to be part of the Board of Evil Writers - I know others have nominated me for it previously, when writing in other fandoms We'll see if I write any more for the LC fandom (one of my very first fandoms, and I believe the one that introduced me to fanfic). The feedback so far has been lovely, but I'm focusing mainly on writing original fiction these days. Thank you very much for your kind words, if the story were to be nominated I would, of course, be ridiculously happy.

/Cosmic

Thanks for sharing this. Feel free to torture (within reason of course) poor Clark any time, it's most enjoyable.

Very satisfying, nail biting read.
I really liked how Klein was portrayed and how important he was to saving Clark through all of this.
I enjoyed this fic a lot ^_^ Thanks

Great story! I love the idea of Lois finding our instead of Diana Stride and that all the hardship brought them closer together. I did not see that twist coming at the end of the first day. Totally evil but oh so good. Love the ending!

What an amazing story. You sent us on a roller coaster ride of emotional highs and lows. Your writing is beautiful and very compelling. I'm glad you tackled this story. I remember when the episode first aired that I also thought the solution the show offered crazy and totally inappropriate. You certainly fixed that.

Great ending and hope you write more.

It wad a very nice story, indeed. And well written, too. I like your solution to the poisening much better. I agree that comparing kryptonite to cancer was a pretty stupid idea on the show.

I hope to be reading more from you in the future

Thank you very much! Torturing Clark (and all other fave characters of mine) is a favorite pasttime of mine.


Thank you! Involving Dr Klein was fun. I hope your nails survived


Thank you! I thought it was an interesting experiment, letting Lois in on the secret while fearing for Clark's life, rather than in a calmer setting where she can immediately get angry.


Thank you so much! English isn't my first language and it's been a while since I last wrote in English (at least fiction), so I'm glad that worked. The show's solution to Kryptonite was and will forever be completely stupid and I'm glad fanfic exists so we can explore other ways to solve the story.


Thank you! Complaring Kryptonite to cancer was really dumb and even though it's all fiction, it still needs to rest on some kind of believability. They failed at that...