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![[Linked Image]](http://loisclarktribute.com/images/fanfic/banner/threerules.png) All comments are welcome here. This is a multi-chapter fic - Rewrite of the Pilot where we explore what could have happened if we had seen Clark Kent display a little more patience throughout the Pilot.
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Hmmm.... Interesting premise about exploring a more patient Clark. This should be a great new and creative perspective on the pilot and hopefully subsequent episodes.
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Hmmm.... Interesting premise about exploring a more patient Clark. This should be a great new and creative perspective on the pilot and hopefully subsequent episodes. Hey SupesFan! It'll cover more than just the Pilot but definitely with a different take from Clark and some from Lois as well. As you can see in the Teaser it's not your typical Episode Adaptation.  Hope you enjoy!
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Okay, okay, so I might have left a bit of a cliffhanger out there for you all to chew on for the week. Barring any disasters I'm hoping to be posting once a week so we'll see how that goes. Chapter 2 is up. Enjoy!
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Yay! I have been waiting! 
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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Delightful. And I love it that Lois knows from the start.
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Yay! I have been waiting! Hey Morgana! The wait is over. Next chapter is up for weekly update. Delightful. And I love it that Lois knows from the start. Hey Framework! I'm glad you liked the twist in the introduction of Superman and Lois. More to come! Chapter 3 is up.
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Okay, this definitely is an intersting take. I like Lois' reaction to Superman and Clark. I hope they'll sit down and talk soon. Waiting for more
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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Hey all, Sorry for the delay on the update. Chapter 5 is up and ready for your enjoyment. I hope to get more regular with the postings. It's honestly just been crazy with RL and the Kerths prep. I hope everyone enjoys this chapter. It was a lot of fun to draw out the naming of our favorite hero. 
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Okay, this definitely is an intersting take. I like Lois' reaction to Superman and Clark. I hope they'll sit down and talk soon. Waiting for more Hey bakasi! Thanks for reading. Yeah, Lois' reaction is very different from cannon for obvious reasons. I'm enjoying writing this different take on our favorite characters. I'm hoping everyone is enjoying this fic as much as I am
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Just caught up, and I'm absolutely loving this!  This is exactly what I was looking for when I asked if there were any post-early-reveal fics; I love how Lois is supportive of Clark and adding her own contributions to the Lexcorp investigation! This almost feels like a fixfic, "What if everyone was smarter in S1?" We've got Lois seeing through both Luthor and Clark, Clark not coming across as jealous and petty, Luthor finding B39... More please.
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Just caught up, and I'm absolutely loving this! This is exactly what I was looking for when I asked if there were any post-early-reveal fics; I love how Lois is supportive of Clark and adding her own contributions to the Lexcorp investigation! This almost feels like a fixfic, "What if everyone was smarter in S1?" We've got Lois seeing through both Luthor and Clark, Clark not coming across as jealous and petty, Luthor finding B39... More please.  Hey Queenie! I'm so glad you liked what I've got so far. There's a lot of fun in this one. I hope it's everything you were searching for in your pursuit for early season reveals. Chapter 6 is up and ready for your divulgence as requested.
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Latest chapter is up. Chapter 9.
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Chapter 10 is now up. We should have regular postings now that the Kerths are over. Hope everyone enjoys! All comments welcome as always.
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Chapter 11 is now up. Hope everyone enjoys! All comments welcome as always.
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Okay, this is getting interesting. I'm curious what's going to happen next and how Luthor's presence will affect the following events. Waiting for the next part 
It's never too dark to be cool.
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Urgh! It is time for me to get back into the swing of things and comment on this story! Welcome back. Enjoying what's been posted so far.
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Okay, this is getting interesting. I'm curious what's going to happen next and how Luthor's presence will affect the following events. Waiting for the next part Hey bakasi!  Yeah, I'm totally taking liberty with the events in cannon now. Lex Luthor in Smallville with Trask was too tempting not to play into it some. Hope you like the next part. Urgh! It is time for me to get back into the swing of things and comment on this story! Welcome back. Enjoying what's been posted so far. Hey Morgana! Thanks for the welcome back. I guess I've been a little AWOL during Kerths on this fic but we're getting pretty close to a conclusion. Hope you enjoy the next part and thank you for reading and commenting. Chapter 12 is now up.
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Martha felt her blood run cold at the mention of her son’s name. Lois continued to explain the situation, but all Martha could comprehend from her pleas was that her son was in trouble.
“Where are you?” When in DEEP trouble, call Martha and Jonathan!
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Just read chapter 13. Fanning myself as I turn on the cold water in my shower. I am so glad you are continuing to "rule" this story.
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