It is great to see that a story you have been working on for many months is now on the msbs! No doubt, there are a lot of people reading it and I hope they will comment.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
Morgana, Thanks for starting comments on my story. I have really appreciated your insight and contributions to this and my other stories. Since you've been so busy with work you haven't seen how this turns out and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I look forward to your comments.