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As I stated in my Author's Note, I take no responsibility for any vomit stains or items (clothing, laptops, phones, Kindles, carpets, couches, etc) that may become ruined for said stains resulting from this fic.
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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It's a good thing poor Ralph is not a real person. You described him quite - I'm not sure I know the right words. Perhaps this because English is not my first language.
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. Thank you for sharing.
It's never too dark to be cool.
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Thank you! I couldn't help but go for the grossest possible setting I could think of!
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
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"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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It's a good thing poor Ralph is not a real person. You described him quite - I'm not sure I know the right words. Perhaps this because English is not my first language.
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. Thank you for sharing. Haha, thank you! Given what we saw of Ralph in the series (not much but still), it was easy to peg the kind of guy he'd be even at home.
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Hee hee, that was a well-written story. You did a great job describing Ralph's behavior and home in a way that was very evocative, for better or for worse
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Hee hee, that was a well-written story. You did a great job describing Ralph's behavior and home in a way that was very evocative, for better or for worse Thanks, Talia! I'll admit that after reading Terry's The Disciplinary Hearing, I feel a smidge bad about making Ralph such a creep. But only a little.
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Haha! Cute story with sweet little moments in it! And the writing, the imagery was—unfortunately—really well done!
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Haha! Cute story with sweet little moments in it! And the writing, the imagery was—unfortunately—really well done! Thanks, KSaraSara! Glad you enjoyed it, despite the fact that Ralph's place makes us all need a mental tetanus shot.
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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