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FDK: Love Realized Ch. 20 of 32
#288353 02/16/21 09:27 AM
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Re: FDK: Love Realized Ch. 20 of 32
Ray #288354 02/16/21 06:52 PM
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Hello Ray,

With this snowy day in Chicago, I finally got a chance to catch up on you wonderful story! I wanted you to know that I am reading your work and love seeing Laura find love! It was very tough at first to even think that Lois would abandon her child but great to see that their relationship is developing with trust and love. Keep up the amazing work!
Re: FDK: Love Realized Ch. 20 of 32
Ray #288361 02/19/21 09:41 AM
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Hi MDS21!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my story. I'm also from the Chicago area so I know what it is to be snowed in! I hope that the scenes between Lois and Lara at Thanksgiving helped explain what Lois's motivation was back then and how sorry and remorseful she is now for her decision. I hope I showed Lara's journey to forgiveness before that meeting and I also hope that you found them working together to get Clark's ship back believable.
Ray

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