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Sara

Hi,

Great part.

I just have no time for proper feedback here, and the rest of the week looks just as bad, but I loved this chapter, Sara. I loved Clark waking up, wondering and doubting about him and Lois, and Lois's not very wordy but extremly eloquent assurance that she is not going anywhere, and then Clark's so poignant "I'm back" comment. I take it he means that now that Lois will stay with him, he is back to what he was when he was a child, when he was so hopeful, before death and loss had touched him.

And I loved it that Elle would blush so hotly when she insisted that she was not "involved" with Henderson's agent!

Ann

Sweet scene with Clark and Lois...

When did I join the party, you ask? Well, now that it's the last few parts I figure you can't break my heart anymore, so it's safe to dip my toe in the water Although of course you were just torturing Clark in the previous section... but if he's got his powers back, that'll take care of that little problem

The stuff with Elle has me totally mystified, of course, but it's interesting nonetheless. I liked the bit where she tried to plead the Fifth <g>

PJ

Thank you guys for the feedback!!

Welcome to the party, Pam! Reading out of order, are we? Anyway, glad you enjoyed!

And thank you Ann and Maria for the comments!!

Part 33 up soon!

Sara