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Nan, I have disgustingly little time to give you any sort of feedback now, but I have to tell you that I found this hugely enjoyable. There were so many funny little details, such as Jimmy noticing that Lois seemed to be picking up Clark's mannerisms, holding her head in a certain way and then having to run off! Jimmy could only hope that Lois's babbling would not rub off on Clark! thumbsup

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Lots of plot threads still being woven together... but it is fun to see Henderson balance his two identities. Does Clark ever feel like a proud papa, with his two proteges to train? goofy It's got to have made a few subtle changes in his relationship with Lois... I wouldn't mind seeing his thoughts on that, if you think you could fit it in smile

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Enjoying this, but I can't help feeling that Ultra Woman seems to be fading into the background to a certain extent. I know the focus is on Henderson, but even so it might be interesting to see more of Lois in action.


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Thanks, thanks hyper


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Hi,

Great part. hyper


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An excellent part! smile1

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yes, glad to see this up and going again!

Henderson needs to be a little more careful. His excuses as Black Knight are almost as bad as Clark's!

I also liked Jimmy's comment that that stairs were faster than the elevator. This is true in my office building, as well.


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Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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