I really like this story, Nan. One thing that particularly strikes me how likable your characters are. It's good to be in their company, pure and simple. Henderson, Norma, Maria, Lois, Jimmy... and of course Clark, though he wasn't in this chapter.
Well, I like nice people, and I like seeing them being nice and trying to do good things. I like horrible people so much less, and I don't necessarily even like to hate them. But I do wish Henderson, Ultra woman and Superman the best of luck in stopping the horrible rapist in this story.
Ann