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FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37925 01/26/07 08:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA Psychofurball OP Columnist
OP Psychofurball Columnist Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA	Marking my spot. I shall give you fdk tomorrow. And WOOHOO Sara story. <G> Rach Me: what are you looking at Snatches pic OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the chocolate isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37926 01/26/07 09:32 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Welcome back, Sara!!!! It's just great to have you back! And this is a delightful story. Wonderful. Quote The woman was staring at him. Staring as if... He didn't have any clothes on. And he didn't. Have any clothes on. This is priceless!!! Oh, so sweet and funny! (Of course, we have to feel a little sorry for the poor man who doesn't know who he is, and is naked before a woman to boot....) Quote The way she kept looking at him... like she was trying not to look. And her heart would race ever so faster every time she snuck a peek. She obviously knew him, and... liked him? Aaawww.... Quote Well, that would be a good thing; he wasn't immune to her, either. Of course, she was fully clothed while he wasn't, but he couldn't deny the way his heart rate had increased and his breathing had become just a touch quicker. And it wasn't from the hike up five flights of stairs. Aaaawwwwwww!!!!! Quote "I've been here before, right?" She ducked her head a bit and stepped around him awkwardly to shut the door. Was she blushing? "Yeah, of course, Superman. You know that..." Awww, the darling awkwardness.... Quote He shook his head slightly. "Okay, why do you keep calling me Superman? Is it some sort of... private joke or something? A nickname? Please tell me I don't call myself that." Her brow creased and she cocked her head. "That's... your name, Superman. Don't you..." She trailed off, and then her eyes widened. "You don't remember, do you? Anything." "I... no, I guess I don't. But..." He tried to keep the slight whimper from invading his voice. "Superman?" Oh, poor, poor - man who doesn't know who he is yet.... That slight whimper in his voice just got to me. Quote She needed to stop staring. She really needed to stop staring. This was Superman. In need of help. And she was taking advantage of the fact that he was more than half... "Let me see if I can find you some clothes or something, Supe-" He started to wince. "I'll see what I can scrounge up." Aww, you gotta love Lois here, too.... Quote She rushed off to her bedroom, resisting the urge to shut the door behind her and freak out. Aaawww!!! Quote He'd landed outside her apartment. Her breath caught. Her apartment. That... had to mean something, didn't it? Sure, he'd made a huge crater next to her dumpster and didn't have a clue who he was, but he'd been heading her direction before he conked his head. And that had to mean something. He trusted her. He'd obviously been in some sort of distress, and he'd trusted her to help him. He just hadn't realized how much help he would need. Aaww, I just totally love this!!! Quote And it wasn't like she had any men's clothing around. Not even Clark's, though Superman was far broader in the shoulders, anyway. Taller, too. That's what you think, Lois. Quote Though maybe he liked the bright and flashy colors. A brief image of Superman in neon pink bike shorts and a equally loud top flashed through her mind. She stifled a giggle. Quote Did you... uh..." Eyes on his face, Lane. Adorable! Quote "Maybe you want to shower while I'm gone. There are clean towels in there, and hopefully I'll be back by the time you're done... otherwise you'll be sitting in a towel, which I just told you was... It shouldn't take me too long." Maybe she'll recognize him when he's wearing only a towel? Quote "All right. I think I can manage that." He ran a hand through his hair and let out a deep breath. "Thank you for... all of this, Ms...?" Oh. Right. He didn't... know her. No reason for that to bother her. Really. He didn't even know his own name. "Lane. Lois Lane. But you call me Lois." Bond. James Bond. But you can call me... naaahh. Quote He smiled that familiar smile of his. "Thank you, Lois. And... be sure to pass along my gratitude to your friend Clark." She couldn't help but smile back. "He's your friend, too, but I'll let him know." She couldn't help but smile back - aww, it's adorable! Quote Either Clark wasn't home, or he slept like a rock. His neighbors didn't; that was for sure. She scowled. More than one had stuck their head out the door and yelled for her to shut up. Didn't they realize what was at stake here? The world needed their superhero. And he needed clothes. Quote She made her way past the couch and picked up the picture he kept on his end table. Him and her line dancing at the Smallville Corn Festival. Something Martha had snapped when they hadn't been paying attention. She looked so happy, carefree. "Where are you, Clark?" She ran her hand down the glass over his image. So sweet... and so full of longing, and perhaps regrets.... Quote Clark had a... a... She stepped around to look at the opposite side. A secret compartment... And half a dozen of Superman's suits. Ahhhh!!! Evil cliffhanger!!! How will Lois react? Will she be angry? C'mon, Lois, right now the man who might have provoked your anger is a helpless amnesiac after having saved the world from Nightfall, and he is in your apartment, probably wearing only a towel.... Please hurry back with more, Sara! Ann

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37927 01/26/07 10:41 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Wow Sara... Loved Lois' babbling and Superman's wincing over his name If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37928 01/27/07 12:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 402 South Carolina, USA C Caroline Beat Reporter
Caroline Beat Reporter C Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 402 South Carolina, USA	Loved it! Can't wait for the next parts. I especially loved his wincing and cringing at the name "Superman". Not many men would want to have to live up to that when they were standing naked in a "stranger's" apartment! Poor Clark. And I didn't expect her to find the suits! It was a great place to end it; I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next. In the meantime, thanks for entertaining me while I drank my morning coffee

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37929 01/27/07 01:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Yay! Kraftie story Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37930 01/27/07 03:38 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Oh, fun Sara! I liked all the stuff that Ann did, so go back and read her comments again So... is she going to figure it out immediately, or wait til she sees Superman in Clark's clothes? Either way, it oughtta be fun to watch... PJ

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37931 01/27/07 03:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2005 Posts: 546 France P Poussin Columnist
Poussin Columnist P Joined: Apr 2005 Posts: 546 France	Oh that was fun!! I loved it! Now, I wonder if Lois will understand that Clark is Superman or if she'd come up with another explanation... well, even if she figures him out, I'm not sure she could be angry against him right now. Not when he has amnesia after having saved the world and that he is pratically naked in her appartment. I'm really looking forward to next part.

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37932 01/27/07 05:38 AM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Oh, this is going to be good! I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37933 01/27/07 06:25 AM
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MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	Quote Didn't they realize what was at stake here? The world needed their superhero. And he needed clothes. Oh, that was a good laugh, Sara, thank you! (/me wipes away tears.) Quote There must be a room or something behind the wine rack! Clark Kent had been hiding something from her. From everyone. She rushed over to the wooden structure and started feeling along the walls. There had to be some sort of catch or hinge that opened it. I love this. Lois breaks in to get clothes for Superman, who is sitting in her apartment naked, and she gets distracted by something she feels the need to investigate. That is so ... Lois! Ok, so we have two options here. Lois will either realize that Clark is Superman, especially in light of Clark's absence, or she will assume that Clark is holding suits for Superman. I hope it will be the first but since we have three more chapters to go it will probably be the second. Great start, Sara. I love it already. Post again soon! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37934 01/27/07 06:38 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Great! can't wait for more. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37935 01/27/07 08:53 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles jojo_da_crow Top Banana
jojo_da_crow Top Banana Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles	I adore Nighfall stories so of course I'm loving every second of this one. Interesting take that she might find out right away that he is Clark. Haha, poor Lois she won't even be able to get really mad at him for a few days till he gets his memories back. I can't wait for more! Angry Clark: CLARK SMASH! Lois: Ork!

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37936 01/27/07 09:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands Saskia Top Banana
Saskia Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands	Oooooh! Sara's writing again! Absolutely marvelous. And what a story... Poor Clark. Complete amnesia, thus not knowing about any of his two persona's. So there he is, all naked and Lois is telling him he's called Superman. Poor thing! Here, lemme give you a hug! Lois is just... great. She's doing her best to help him and not take advantage. I mean, there is a naked man in her apartment after all. I also couldn't help but notice you haven't lost touch with your evil tendencies. That cliffhanger! More now? Saskia I tawt I taw a puddy cat!

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37937 01/28/07 06:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA Psychofurball OP Columnist
OP Psychofurball Columnist Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA	Yay! I love this story, And I can't wait til you get the next part up. Wonderful fresh idea. Good job, Sara! And oooo drools naked clark...well semi. <g> Rach Me: what are you looking at Snatches pic OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the chocolate isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) #37938 01/28/07 04:24 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM	Yay!! Thanks for all the wonderful feedback, guys! I'd forgotten how great (and addicting ) it feels! Ann - Thanks for the welcome back, and thank you for pointing out some of my favorite lines! Especially the bit about Lois realizing that Clark had aimed himself towards her apartment on his way back. Ankit - Glad you loved the babbling! I had so much fun with Lois babble throughout this story. As for Clark wincing at her calling him Superman, I can't remember if Paul or I came up with that, but I think it was Paul. Caroline - That little discovery lent itself well to a cliffhanger, didn't it? And thanks for pointing out the Loisness of her investigating. I'll pretend I'd had that in mind. g (Really, though, I think Lois has credit for that one; she was writing herself at that point, I think. ) Jojo - I adore Nightfall stories, too! First one I've tried my hand at writing, though, but I'm having a blast with it. If you haven't read David's An Affair to Remember yet, you must! It's one of the best Nightfall stories out there! Sas - Evil? Moi? I think you have me confused with someone else (like yourself ). Look for part 2 in the next few minutes! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) Psychofurball #255377 06/15/14 02:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Oh, that's so worth the bid I made Quote "Where am I?" He groaned, bringing a hand to his head. Whatever had just happened had hurt, and now he felt dizzy and disoriented. Hit by a tini-tiny piece of rock? Quote And a woman. Quote The woman was staring at him. Staring as if... He didn't have any clothes on. Sex fiend! Quote She was stammering something now, something barely discernable through the loud pounding in his head. Police! Police! Quote But I felt it--you--when it--you landed. The ground shook a little, and I... do you want my jacket?" She knows he’s Superman. And she’s not running screaming. And he’s naked. But she’s not all over this. Thus, can’t be Cat. So…Lois? Quote And there was a crazy woman babbling at him. Yeah, he’s sitting in a grace (i.e. a hole a six feet deep) and is naked, but she is the crazy one. Quote "... you okay, Superman?" Well…not a big surprise by now, but still, twist! We are going to have a naked Superman in the same apartment as Lois Lane! Quote Superman? He just stared blankly. Who on Earth was Superman? And what kind of egotistical... What? It just describes his prowess with the ladies. Quote Then you can tell me what happened, /check/ Quote and if you're hungry, I can fix you something to... Not a good idea. Quote ... I can call for takeout..." Yep. So Lois. As if the nosiness and the babble weren’t enough of an indicator. Quote Where home was. With her. Quote Where his clothes were... Won’t need them at her place. Quote One, two, three, four... five locks? See? Quote Five locks, and she was bringing a strange man into her apartment in the middle of the night? No, she’s taking her beau home. Quote The way she kept looking at him... like she was trying not to look. So, she managed to not drool all the way home? Quote And her heart would race ever so faster every time she snuck a peek. And he thinks hearing her heart is normal? SUPERMAN: Why wouldn’t it be? Quote She obviously knew him, and... liked him? Well…parts of him. CAT: You go, girl! Quote . Of course, she was fully clothed while he wasn't, Quote . Like what his name was, for one. Where he lived... Lord Kal-El. Planet Krypton. Quote A glance around his new surroundings told him it wasn't here. Not with those couches. Quote He shook his head slightly. "Okay, why do you keep calling me Superman? Is it some sort of... private joke or something? A nickname? Maybe due to the size of the stuff they’re growing on Kansas farms? Quote "You don't remember, do you? Anything." Oops? Also, is she now going to pull a Cat on him? Quote "I... no, I guess I don't. But..." He tried to keep the slight whimper from invading his voice. "Superman?" Quote "S-sorry. I don't know what else to call you." Big Boy? Hunk of Steel? Lover Boy? Quote This was Superman. In need of help. CAT: I know just how to help him! Quote And she was taking advantage of the fact that he was more than half... LOIS: …nine. I mean naked. Naked. Yes. Quote "Let me see if I can find you some clothes or something, Supe--" He started to wince. "I'll see what I can scrounge up." Well…I think Wendy once had Lois dress Superman in a dress when she found him naked during one of those dreadful Nightfalls. Quote She rushed off to her bedroom, resisting the urge to shut the door behind her and freak out. Superman was standing in her living room. Naked. Jackpot? Quote And he didn't have a clue who he was. So…bummer? Quote Right now she had to deal with the amnesiac Superman who'd crashed back to Earth in her alleyway. Oh…that’s how she found him. I did wonder. You know, him crashing through her roof and smashing into her bed while she’s in the bathroom would also be funny Quote but he'd been heading her direction before he conked his head. And that had to mean something. Either that or he just evaded some doves and lost control. Quote Well, nothing of hers would fit. That was for sure. Maybe Clark’s old stuff he left here for some obscure reason? Quote Not even Clark's, though Superman was far broader in the shoulders, anyway. Taller, too. Right… Quote And just what did he wear when he wasn't in the suit? Or... maybe he was always in the suit... Or, he walks around naked when he’s home alone with his wife and concubines… Quote A brief image of Superman in neon pink bike shorts and an equally loud top flashed through her mind. She stifled a giggle. Quote it looked like she was going to have to see what Clark's closet had to offer. Oh boy. Quote Where the heck was he at two o'clock in the morning? Out gallivanting with Cat? Quote . This was important, and it would be his fault anyway for not being home. Quote Not that it'll fit right, but it'll be better than just a towel or something. Ooooh! Yes…Maybe he should take a shower and then wrap a towel around his wai…Lois? Lois? Hello? /waves hand/ Lois? Quote and hopefully I'll be back by the time you're done... Otherwise she’d join him? Quote otherwise you'll be sitting in a towel, which I just told you was... Quote Once the lock was open, she hurried inside and shut the door behind her before any of Clark's neighbors decided to complain about her breaking and entering too. Neighbor 1: What’s she doing? Neighbor 2: Don’t worry. That’s just the squeeze of the dude living in 4B. Neighbor 1: Yeah, but she’s breaking in! Neighbor 2: Maybe he broke up with her and she’s trying to get some stuff back? Quote Over to her right, there was a sliver of light peeking out from under his wine rack. Oops? Quote A secret compartment... And half a dozen of Superman's suits. Double Oops? LOIS: So, my partner is doing Superman’s laundry and he didn’t think that relevant information? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK:Super Shook Up 1/4 (It will go as planned or I will bite you...) Psychofurball #255772 06/29/14 04:06 PM
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KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,109 Likes: 41 Albuquerque, NM	Thanks for the feedback! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

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