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Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4769 07/22/03 08:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie OP Beat Reporter
OP Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Wow... getting towards the end now... Comments, anyone? Chris

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4770 07/22/03 10:47 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 148 Hadera, Israel avia Hack from Nowheresville
avia Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 148 Hadera, Israel	Chris, You bet I (and I'm sure others) have comments! This was a great part. It had both romance from both Lois' and CJ's POV as well as a some suspense and you've closed with another And how cute is this: Quote CJ had graduated quickly from the red-and-white "partnership" roses of their first evening together to all red ones. He didn't need to tell her anything about the depth of his feelings because the flowers spoke of them eloquently enough, but he did so, anyway. CJ, Lois was discovering, was a true romantic, with the soul of a poet. It was a pity, she thought, that he'd gone into law. He would have made a terrific romance writer. I'll leave a few others for other ppl to quote. Can we please have part 29 NOW? Avia "I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?" Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4771 07/23/03 12:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Ahhhhhh....! Okay, right now, I'd be glad to see CJ get his powers back. Your Luthor is scary. Post more, NOW! PJ

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4772 07/23/03 02:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Yikes!! I'm scared too !! I bet CJ will be missing those powers pretty quickly! Post more SOON!! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4773 07/23/03 07:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 52 Phoenix, Arizona Vicki K Freelance Reporter
Vicki K Freelance Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 52 Phoenix, Arizona	Aaaaack!!! Vicki The world is made up of three kinds of people: those who can count, and those who can't.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4774 07/23/03 07:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Me too! Post now! Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4775 07/23/03 08:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Krissie get back here! Great piece. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4776 07/23/03 11:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Good instalment. As others have said you present a nice diversity of story here. We get a sampling of the feelings Lois and Clark have for each other then it gets contrasted by the menace of Luthor. And we know what he wants. Lot's of potential here. Good cliffhanger, but let's investigate what we have. Lois, at Luthor's mercy. Clark is coming but he has no powers. Luthor has a gun. Any bets as to who winds up dead? Tank (who thinks that at least one of our infatuated duo needs to sacrifice him/herself for the other)

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4777 07/23/03 12:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry Columnist
gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Ohmygoodness! I can't believe you did that! My heart is in my throat and the blood has left my legs. There may be a mini typo when you wrote: Lois Land and CJ Kent: The Hottest Team in Town. More please! Soon! gerry

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4778 07/23/03 10:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Chris An excellent part! Yikes, what a place to stop! Luthor is so evil. Please post the next part ASAP! Tricia

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) #4779 07/24/03 08:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie OP Beat Reporter
OP Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Avia: thank you! Glad you liked this. So, uh, you want to know what happens next, do you? I'll think about it... Pam: Quote Okay, right now, I'd be glad to see CJ get his powers back. You would, would you? H'm. I'm delighted to hear that you think Luthor is scary. He's supposed to be. You want more? Liz: another scared person! Yay!!! I'm on a roll. Vicki: Quote Why do I find myself hoping that the Clark from our universe would show up in this one, even just for moral support?? Crazy, I know. Yep, very crazy. As for your other suggestion... Who knows (besides the author, that is!)? Delighted that this part met with your approval. Quote Yeah, count me in with everyone else who said "post part 29 NOW!" Nan: Quote Me too! Post now! Gosh, you guys are impatient! Maria: your posts always make me smile... even if I made you scowl this time around. Tank: Quote Lois, at Luthor's mercy. Clark is coming but he has no powers. Luthor has a gun. Any bets as to who winds up dead? Now, why on earth would you think that anyone was going to end up dead? Thanks for the positive vibes here. Gerry: thanks! Just the effect I was going for! (Actually, better than the one I was aiming for.) Thanks also for pointing out the typo. It has now been corrected on my 'master' copy. Tricia: thank you... and another vote for a rapid follow up. Oh, okay then... Chris

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