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Again, sorry if I'm repeating myself here - another one I can't remember whether I posted the fdk or not.

Cris, this just gets better and better. Excellent start to this one with Luthor's introspection - gave me a chill down my spine as I read. In fact, the introspection is great all the way through.

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“Why wouldn’t I be, Nigel? Just yesterday Lois decided that she would marry me, though we both knew that was only a matter of time. It did, however, happen faster than expected.”
Ooooooh, don't you just hate him? :goof:

Love the scene with Perry and Clark - great to see them starting to gell again as a team and Perry taking charge and declaring with confidence that they'll bring down Lex. Way to go!

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She was determined to carry this through; she wasn’t going to back down. <<Not this time, >> she thought.
:p Now, now, don't go making promises you can't keep, Lois. <g>

And...oh oh....darkness brewing in that end to this segment.

Loving this, Cris - looking forward to more!

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Labrat, you don't have to worry about repeating yourself. Besides, it's not like you're saying unpleasant things :p

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Now, now, don't go making promises you can't keep, Lois. <g>
You seem quite sure of that... Too bad the writer doens't seem to agree goofy

I'm glad you like the introspection. I used to think there was too much introspection (I even told Jose my charecters though too much). However, Tricia said she liked it, so I chose to not cut it down (though in the next two or three parts there isn't that much, but I think it wasn't what the story needed at that point)

I'm really glad you're liking the story. I hope it doesn't disappoint you as it moves along.

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Sorry Cris that I'm posting late -- getting caught up. Thought I would wait until I finished everything you posted before commenting, but couldn't, because this is really so good.

As was mentioned -- some wonderful introspection from Lex. You've captured his character and at the same time given us some new insight.

I also loved some of the Superman thoughts.

Expecially this:

He wondered what the use of superpowers was at times, if they didn’t keep him from making the same mistakes as any other human being.

I will keep reading and add more to the comments as this story really deserves our notice.

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I'm really happy to see that you joined in on this story. It means a lot. And you don't have to worry about taking time; it's never late for feedback, mostly if it's made up with nice comments. smile1

I really appreciate not only that you caught up with this story, but that you took the time to leave your thoughts as well. Highly appreciated.

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