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To those who wanted to know why Lois was so militant against a certain group, next section, I promise.

Hi Dandello,

Another good part. If I hadn't seen the "Smart Kids" episode, I never would have realized that Superman featured prominently in the original; you've done an excellent job of keeping the feel of the episode while excising a main character.

Of course, I do miss Clark and hope he'll be coming back soon. Considering that there are only projected to be two more parts of the story left, I would guess he'd have to enter the story in the next part, especially give the fire on Clinton Street. I would be very surprised if the fire's location on *his* street were a coincidence.

Looking forward to part four -- Clark (I hope), awaited explanation, further story plot, and all. :-)

Joy,
Lynn

Delightful part. Looking forward to more.

I'm glad to see this story back!

I like this mature and empathic Lois. I like seeing her interacting so well with children. I like her suspicions against Luthor. I like that she is pregnant with Clark's child.

Of course, now I'd like to see Clark return to her!

Ann

While going through the Smart Kids script, so many things about Lois in this script seemed to make her, well, not nearly as bright as she should have been starting with dismissing the initial reports of four missing kids.

As for Clark - well, he doesn't live at 344 Clinton because he never got the job at the Planet.

Expect some edits at toward the end of this section - I lost track of story time and need to fix it.

The second time around, Lois sure noticed a lot of things. But now there're only two more parts to go and no Clark in sight. Can't wait to find out how you're going to resolve this. Oh, and is this a universe without a Lois? I sort of forgot and now I'm worried what might happen if Lois where to return to her own universe

Michael

Oops, I hadn't realized that there are still two parts to go. That makes a lot more sense now.

I seem to remember that this Lois has an apartment on Clinton Street--maybe the one that Clark would have gotten if he had stayed.

I am very curious to find out what's going to happen with this mismatched Lois and Clark. You've got both halves of the typical 'he said/she said' rape accusation case, only in this case they're both right: Lois really was date raped, and Clark really didn't do anything wrong. I hope that this Lois will figure out that she's not dealing with the same Clark. I'm guessing that even this innocent Clark would want to, as someone put it, clean up after his counterpart. After all, this child is going to need at least some kind of relationship with the only other Kryptonian on the planet, if only as a friend of the family.

I hope RL and the muse cooperate long enough for you the finish this very intriguing story.

I really enjoyed this story (I found it while going through the old Fanfic challenges) and I'm wondering when the next chapter will be.

I suspect my muse ran off to Tahiti.
If anybody sees her, tell her go home.

OK. Done. Now when is the next part?

I believe she was detained in Vancouver by RealLife and associates. However with time served and good behavior I am hoping she will get an early release.


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