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FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79854 06/14/11 08:56 AM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Missing Lois - TOC A taste of Chapter 4, Part 4: Quote Sam looked at Lois and then announced, “He was pretty broken up when you left.” “Poor Clark.” Her heart ached. She truly was fond of Clark. She knew how much her mental breakdown had affected him. “When you find him, tell him I’d like to see him. I need to apologize. I’ve really ruined his life.” Superman flew in through the window. “You didn’t ruin my life, Lois.” “Clark!” She ran to him and gave him a sisterly hug. “I’m so sorry.” Superman swallowed and stepped away from her, looking at her carefully. “Lois?” “I owe you something,” Lois said, then slapped him across the face. She had told him not to try to kiss her stand-in again when she first arrived in this dimension. He had broken that pledge. “Don’t let it happen again. This is your last warning.” Sam’s and H.G. Wells’s mouths dropped open. “I deserved that one.” Superman chuckled, rubbing his cheek. “You need to be careful, Lois. You’re really developing some strength in that right arm of yours.” He turned to the others. “She’s back.” Many thanks to my wonderful Beta Readers who are my first line of defense on keeping my Clarks and Loises straight in the reader's mind. Thank you! As always I enjoy any and all feedback. Thank you. Last edited by VirginiaR; 12/14/14 04:33 PM. Reason: Fixed broken Links VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79855 06/14/11 09:09 AM
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scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,723 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Nice to see Lois in her own dimension for a while - at least. Love Clark's 'dream' - that was clever. Joan

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79856 11/07/11 08:31 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote “I don’t know what you and Clark were so worried about. I’m fine.” She turned her head and gasped. “We’re in Smallville. What are we doing here?” “We came to see Martha Kent.” “But Mr. Wells, Martha Kent is dead,” she whispered. /aaand that's why.../ Quote “Am I really home?” He nodded and knocked on the door. /squints eyes/ Quote looking spacey and slightly mental. G Quote Carefully, with her hands behind her back, Clark’s mother placed a few of the photos face down. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79857 11/07/11 04:32 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Joan: Another one of my favorite scenes. Michael: Thank you for always brightening my day with your little bits of humor. (And sometimes your big bits of ) Quote /aaand that's why.../ My first grin of the day... Quote /must remember that she can't just do it herself/ No Lois does not have heat vision. Quote And could you imagine, living with them in the same apartment? That's why I gave Lois an apartment of her own... oh, you mean one Lois and two Clarks. No, I can't imagine... every time I try my imagination freezes and I have to reload it. Quote Maybe a little superspeed would also be a handy defense mechanism/pregnancy assist. Nope, none of that either. Quote Did Lois accidentally cavort with Thor? No, he's Marvel. Lois only cavorts within DC. Quote You know, I just had the craziest thought: What if this Lex treeats her like the most precious thing? Flies her to tropical islands. Dines her with exotic dishes. Spends time with her in front of the TV, watching Lethal Gun and Naked Weapon and eating pizza. Maybe she is. Won't that be the most embarrassing 'rescue' ever? Of course, if that were the case, it wouldn't explain why they had used the Neuroscanner on her back during the Mayoral election? Quote /nods/ And Clark could come visit, too. Wouldn't that be fun, having Lois at home and a Lois on the side? Perhaps she'll accept. Quote Can't imagine her being more reckless if she were a fast healer... Since she's already as reckless as can be. Really? She couldn't be ANY more reckless? :rolleyes: Quote Yep, something's smellin' of dead fish, indeed. Did Wellses coincide in the Alt-dimension? And did this Clark not tell his Lois about the flying and stuff before the wedding? I don't think that the Kents would have family photos of Superman in the living room where anyone from Smallville who happened to stop by could see them. Quote Twins? Hmmmm. Quote A moment from canon? Yep, Canon Clark and Sub. Lois. Quote Or is she from this Alt-canon-world? And can she fly? Not sure what alt-canon world is? An amusement park? This is Canon Lois visiting her hubby, while he's too exhausted to notice she's not his current younger wife. Lois pretends she is a dream, because she's heading back to alt-world and leaving substitute Lois behind for a while longer. Sorry for the dizzyness. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79858 11/10/11 08:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote Thank you for always brightening my day with your little bits of humor Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79859 01/08/12 06:33 PM
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MrsLuthor Columnist Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 635 Ontario	Quote Martha shut the door and exhaled. She returned to the bookcase and righted the photos. Clark would have been angry if Lois had found out that way. Then again, it was his fault he hadn’t come clean with her. Did I miss something, or do we not know why Martha is hiding pictures? .talk nerdy to me.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79860 01/08/12 06:35 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by MrsLuthor: Quote Martha shut the door and exhaled. She returned to the bookcase and righted the photos. Clark would have been angry if Lois had found out that way. Then again, it was his fault he hadn’t come clean with her. Did I miss something, or do we not know why Martha is hiding pictures? An over-abundance of foreshadowing, I'm afraid. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79861 01/08/12 06:41 PM
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MrsLuthor Columnist Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 635 Ontario	Quote Originally posted by VirginiaR: Quote Originally posted by MrsLuthor: [b] Quote Martha shut the door and exhaled. She returned to the bookcase and righted the photos. Clark would have been angry if Lois had found out that way. Then again, it was his fault he hadn’t come clean with her. Did I miss something, or do we not know why Martha is hiding pictures? An over-abundance of foreshadowing, I'm afraid. [/b] As long as I didn't miss something! lol I can't stop reading!!! It's 1:43 in the morning, and I meant to get back on my school sleeping schedule tonight in preparation for Tuesday morning's 6am alarm! lol This story is like drugs! .talk nerdy to me.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79862 01/08/12 06:46 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by MrsLuthor: I can't stop reading!!! It's 1:43 in the morning, and I meant to get back on my school sleeping schedule tonight in preparation for Tuesday morning's 6am alarm! lol This story is like drugs! Nope, you didn't miss anything. Well, thanks, I think. Why don't you get some sleep. That way, you can meet my Mrs. Luthor in the morning (i.e. with fresh eyes). My top New Year's resolution is supposed to get me to bed before midnight as well... I've made it once this year. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) #79863 01/08/12 06:57 PM
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MrsLuthor Columnist Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 635 Ontario	Quote Originally posted by VirginiaR: Quote Originally posted by MrsLuthor: [b]I can't stop reading!!! It's 1:43 in the morning, and I meant to get back on my school sleeping schedule tonight in preparation for Tuesday morning's 6am alarm! lol This story is like drugs! Nope, you didn't miss anything. Well, thanks, I think. Why don't you get some sleep. That way, you can meet my Mrs. Luthor in the morning (i.e. with fresh eyes). My top New Year's resolution is supposed to get me to bed before midnight as well... I've made it once this year. [/b] I've actually been making a second attempt at my SuperNails all night. It's several layers that have to dry and what not, so I'll be up for another couple of hours. lol .talk nerdy to me.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) VirginiaR #256370 07/18/14 11:18 PM
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chelo Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO	Quote “So, what happened to her?” Martha was interested. Lois and Clark’s lives were more fascinating than a soap opera I Love Martha!! she is my model of "how to be a mother" Quote “Are you sure she’ll want to be rescued?” Martha asked, hesitantly. “Of course. She’s married to Lex Luthor, so I’m sure she’s being mistreated. As soon as she learned the truth about him I bet she started trying to escape. At least, I hope so. I know that Lois Lane is destined to be blind when it comes to love, but hopefully not galactically stupid as well.” so... Clark's dream about Lois been tied up and being stroked by a lightning... wasn't just a dream... interesting... Quote He could still taste the strawberries on his lips, but the bowl was gone from the bedside table. Sitting back down on the bed, he sighed. What a perfect dream. I hope those "Clark´s dreams" helps Lois put everything in place, stop confusing her "Kent boys", and start looking for the alt-Lois! A.S.A.P. Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?" Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 4 - The Rescue of Mrs. Luthor (3/14) chelo #256400 07/19/14 10:17 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	chelo: Another day, more comments! Thank you. Quote I Love Martha!! she is my model of "how to be a mother" Now, if I could only act as I write my characters. Quote so... Clark's dream about Lois been tied up and being stroked by a lightning... wasn't just a dream... interesting... Well, she's not Andromeda, so there might have been some dream aspects to the dream. Quote I hope those "Clark´s dreams" helps Lois put everything in place, stop confusing her "Kent boys", and start looking for the alt-Lois! A.S.A.P. Thank you for reading. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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