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FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80684 07/18/11 08:43 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Missing Lois - TOC A taste of Chapter 5, Part 4: Quote The phone rang and he picked it up. “Clark Kent.” “Where’s my wife?” He turned around and faced Lucy, and mouthed ‘Lex Luthor’. Her eyes went wide. “In a safe location,” he finally replied. “She’s my wife and I want her back.” Clark shook his head. “Well, she doesn’t want you back.” Lucy scooted her chair closer. “You kidnapped her and you can quote me on that, Kent.” “Why don’t you give me your contact information, Lex, and I’ll pass it on to Lois. If she wants to contact you, she will.” He smiled, happily knowing full well Lois wouldn’t want anything more to do with her psychopathic husband. “What? So you can kill me and marry my widow? I don’t think so, Kent.” Lucy gasped. Lex accomplished wiping the smile off Clark’s face. “Unlike you, Lex, I don’t kill people,” he replied through gritted teeth. “Neither do I, Kent. Frogs on the other hand…” Lois's husband said flippantly. Many thanks to my great Beta Readers! Please post feedback here. Thank you. Last edited by VirginiaR; 01/12/15 03:30 PM. Reason: Fix Broken Links VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80685 07/19/11 07:00 AM
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immery Blogger I Joined: Sep 2009 Posts: 25 Poland	I've read all 4 first chapters at once, and I have to tell you I love this story. Lucy/Lois and Alt_Clark are anazing, and I love this Alt_Lois. I liked how Lucy could read AltClark both, because she knows Kal, and becouse how AltLois is at core so much like her. I also loved last scene between Lois/Lucy and AltLucy.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80686 07/19/11 12:58 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Well that was a crazy roller coaster ride of emotions. More soon. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80687 07/19/11 03:51 PM
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IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	So alt-Clark hasn't told alt-Lois that he's Clark and he hasn't told her that he's Superman, although she figured out the latter. This can't end well.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80688 07/21/11 02:20 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	immery: I'm glad I got you hooked. There's more. Lots more coming your way. I post every other day... and will until probably the end of the year. Laura: Hope you aren't getting motion sickness. But then, if the character or readers didn't feel anything, what would be the point? Iolanthe: You've probably noticed I try to put in lots of parallels between canon dimension and alt-dimension. If canon Clark doesn't tell canon Lois about his secret identity, then alt-Superman doesn't tell alt-Lois about his other identity either, and suffers the consequences... edited for possible spoilage This is also another case of alt-dimension is canon on its ear. Where in canon dimension Lois got caught in Jaxon's VR machine, in alt-dimension it was Clark. In canon dimension Clark gets blinded, in alt-dimension it's alt-Lois. In canon dimension Lois has a crush on Superman but falls in love with Clark, in alt-dimension alt-Lois has a crush on Clark but falls for alt-Superman. There are more points like these. Can you spot them all? VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80689 08/07/11 08:30 AM
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scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,723 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	This is good news for Clark: Quote For the first time since she had arrived that past summer, Kal’s Lois actually felt like his sister-in-law. I love that Lucy figured out so easily that he'd slept with Lois. Oh that's funny - Lois and Lucy arguing about Superman. Joan

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80690 11/20/11 07:48 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote She raised an eyebrow at him. “I live here, you dolt. What are you doing here?” “You weren’t supposed to return until tomorrow,” he reminded her. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80691 11/20/11 07:49 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote Clark caught this one and then took the case off, adding to the pile. “Want some help?” She stood there and put her hands on her hips. “That insatiable, huh?” Hmm... Lois hasn't heard anything about them not shacking up any longer and I'm not buying she thinks Clark actually needs a break from his Lois. Right? Right? Riiiiight? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80692 11/20/11 11:08 AM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Joan: Glad to know my humor is still shining through those scenes. Michael: BTW Clark never realizes, until it is too late, that he said the wrong thing to Lois (either of them). Quote Also, what will Lois say once Lucy activates it in her presence. That's assuming that Lois... a) regains her sight & b)finds said time-machine. Quote Fine. If you want to call it 'kissing'. Wonder if Clark learned a lot about the different forms of 'kissing' this weekend. And since it's almost Christmas, will Clark get a 'Christmas Present' from Naughty Santa Lois? Quote See? All he needed was a Lois of his own to get Lois out of his system. Hhhmmm. I wonder how long a dose of alt-Lois lasts? Quote Didn't she detail him after her honeymoon weekend in bed? Yeah, and as they say, payback's a b... Quote Maybe Jr. could have a fit of rage? Lex, Jr. kills Lex, Sr.? That would solve a bunch of problems. Quote Also, Lois does have a very erratic temper. Right. And canon Lois is so even keeled. Quote What a great way for a meet-and-greet! And does Lois know she's in her old apartment? Thank you. Yes, Mr. Amazing told her where he was taking her. Quote Did they just turn the Joke into the Joke of a Joke? Well, Cat Grant is editor-in-chief. Quote Yeah. Right. Once a mistake. Twice means he looses his Achievement Badge. And since it took 30 years to get that first badge... Quote Oh boy. So, is Lois going to meet and 'date' Call-Me-Daniel? Hhhmmmm. Quote He's really lucky Lucy can't go near the green stuff at the moment. Yep, that was another 'open mouth, insert foot' moment. Quote Oh dear. Maybe Lucy should mention she's carrying Clark Kent's kiddo and hitting her wouldn't be very nice? Good thing that a)alt-Lois is blind and it's harder to hit someone you can't see, b)Lucy has super healing properties. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80693 11/21/11 07:44 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote BTW Clark never realizes, until it is too late, that he said the wrong thing to Lois (either of them). It does appear to be a recurring pattern. Quote That's assuming that Lois... a) regains her sight & b)finds said time-machine. You're point being? Michael PS: Part 4 might take a day or two. Need to catch up with current stories and won't get to FDK on Wednesday Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80694 01/09/12 09:02 AM
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MrsLuthor Columnist Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 635 Ontario	It's hilarious that the Lois' don't like each other lol .talk nerdy to me.

Re: FDK - Missing Lois: Chapter 5 - Earth Angel (3/12) (39/109) #80695 01/09/12 12:56 PM
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OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by MrsLuthor: It's hilarious that the Lois' don't like each other lol Headstrong, hard-nosed women rarely like each other. Isn't that why Lois and Mayson never got along? VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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