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You can find the [i]Another Dimension, Another Time, Another Lois[/i] TOC here. As you can see the Part totals have been raised up a notch to 25. My super Betas (Thank you again!) and I have decided that my Part 24 was just too long to be one part. Well, that's it! Book 1 is finished, unless I add another scene to the Epilogue. <<rubs hands in anticipation>> Now, on to work on Book 2! Thank you for reading. Should you have any comments, please post them below.
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VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Darn it. How much easier would life be if we could just function perfectly without sleep? So much more time on our hands...
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain
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“Who needs drugs to control people, when you can use fear?” “So, what’s going on between you and Dan?” “Ugh, not much. There was just that *one* time with him and Mayson and now he follows me around like a lost puppy.” Our paths crossed on an investigation into the death of a friend of mine, Mayson Drake, an Assistant D.A. who…” Okay, so that *one* time was probably a bit awkward… Anyway, I saw her car explode. She had been inside.” And then she was all over Lois. *SCNR* After I had started dating Lex Luthor…” Her eyes clouded. Why had she brought up Lex Luthor? She likes analysis? “You dated Lex Luthor?” Sarah gasped. It seemed Lex’s name still had weight in this town a year after his death. Why. He was a *creep*! “Lex and I had been on a date, when we got delayed here… in the office… by terrorists. They shot him. He died in my arms.” Michael
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Originally posted by Mouserocks: Darn it. How much easier would life be if we could just function perfectly without sleep? So much more time on our hands... Real Life? Sleep? Hey, I've heard of those things, you mean people actually have those? Hmmmm. Interesting. Actually, you can function with little to no sleep, here's the recipe: Take one flying man in blue. Add in one thunderstorm. Mix until sleep is no longer required (or at least not large amounts). Good luck!
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Michael: Hi! “Ugh, not much. There was just that *one* time with him and Mayson and now he follows me around like a lost puppy.”
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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Um... that was Dan's dream, not Lois's... and don't forget Jena, she was there too. But, she's dead. Oh, wait. Dream. Otherwise, same theme as later on... Okay, Lois isn't the only one in need of therapy. Yes. Dan's always been a bit off. Also, with the previous bit being to good to give up and people kind of forgetting that Lois had Mayson and Dan serially, instead of at the same time...Dan's necromancing just seemed to work Michael
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That cracks me up! I'm glad that Lois is completely falling for Scardino. Joan
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Originally posted by scifiJoan: That cracks me up!
I'm glad that Lois is completely falling for Scardino.
Joan Hi Joan:
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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