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You can find the [i]Another Dimension, Another Time, Another Lois[/i] TOC here.

I hope you are getting a clearer picture of what life without Clark has been like for Lois.

Comments?

/Psst. See, didn't that shot help? No make-out sessons on a bed with good ol' DEA guy. That's an improvement, right? /

So, this is like the old bait-and-switch where the daughter tells her parents she’s pregnant only to retract and tell then she just didn’t get into college.

Poor little Jimmy. He probably was too ecstatic to even be near Lois to make a claim.

/waits patiently while binding fingers in chew-protectors/





Yeah, wouldn’t want to wake up to Jimmy sucking her toes.

Can I say *wrong* guy for Lois?

Well, he’s being a body guard. It *is* his job.



Did he try to cop a feel?

Oooooh!

This doesn’t sound too good.

So, that’s how you got this one in. I *was* wondering. And she’s not whisper-speaking ‘bomb’ to prevent a panic?

Clark!

Is inner Clark jealous of outer Clark? Does he know he’s getting replaced?

Ooooh! Ooooh!

It’s not M&J, but a very close second. And completely out of the blue. Very well done.

Clark?

Michael

A reader! Hi, Michael!

Kind of.

Or still a little embarrassed about how he had treated her while on pheromones. [It wasn't Ralph bad, but possibly harem costume bad... let reader(s) imaginations go wild.]

I know you're sad (yes, I know, that's twice now), but really, what was the point of dosing Lois without Clark? I thought about having her dosed and sleeping with Eduardo and them both regretting it and making everything ackward at work, especially him being married and all, but changed my mind. I thought about her getting dosed but not having any reaction to anyone at all, but that really didn't seem real. I NEVER thought of hooking her up with Luthor though. So, I figured, Clark was gone, someone would have to cover the dock strike, why not Lois? In my next story, Lois will , does that make you feel better? <<mumbles>> Sorry, Spoiler Police caught me!

Um... Yep?... Ackward!

Okay, I guess it's safe to post my Tank WHAM warning, now... Well, most of it...

Does that clarify things? (I figure if I'm going to write a WHAM warning, I should at least have fun with it. )



Ewwww.

In her dreams?

No wonder Dan dresses like that! He's trying to act like MG from Lethal Weapon!

Yes.

Nope. He's DEA, not Secret Service. (Not even going to mention how unsecretive Secret Service has been in RL lately.)

No MJ's Cafe.

No, just an idiot (and was that a pun?)

No, speaking the word "bomb" would probably not compute with Dan.

Well, she is Lois Lane!

LOVE IT!

Oooppsie. I reached my smilie limit. On to Part 2...

Michael's FDK Reply - Part 2 -

Yep! I believe he held out his hand and said, "Let her go!" :rolleyes:

Yep. Clark. See, I told you he would still show up. (Okay, this is in her dreams, but beggers can't be choosey can they?)

Michael, Clark's dead.

Um... Outer Clark? Oh, no. That's not Clark.

Thank you.

Some random blond guy.

He's working on it <<ducking>>

Thank you (see bow from above).

She's Lois Lane. She survived 26 years without Clark in her life, did you think she was going to die just because he wasn't around to save her?

Thank you. She needed a refresher course.

Again, Michael, Clark is dead... for the most part. And see the Dan spoiler note from... FDK 9, I think.



<<gulp.>>

Yes, Lois is in Part 11, and 12, and 13, and 14... The story is from her POV. It would be difficult to have a part without her in it. 11 is prepped and ready to post tonight. If I start posting too early I'll get even more behind on my parts for Book 2, which will slow down my posting schedule for Book 2. Speaking of which, I need to finish up Part 10 and send it off to Beta... before she starts

[It wasn't Ralph bad, but possibly harem costume bad... let reader(s) imaginations go wild.]

, does that make you feel better? <<mumbles>> Sorry, Spoiler Police caught me!
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Michael

WANT? Want? No, I don't WANT it! But it seemed the logical course Lois would take in this scenario. I want Lois and Clark being sweet and cuddly and flying around bantering, but sometimes a story doesn't go in that direction. <<Yes, still suffering from a little PTS over sudden reader drop... Gee, it wasn't like I had her CHEAT on Clark with some non-Clark character or anything. They just kissed. :rolleyes: Okay, they were on a bed at the time and they had slept together, but only because he moved her off the couch, but she was still fully clothed... Anyway, Clark's dead and Dan is her boyfriend, it is perfectly legal for them to kiss. Well, their loss, this is when the story starts to get fun.) Okay, I'm starting to babble, let's see what else Michael wrote.

Right, not enough blood to read stories. Got it!

Do you think I'd drive her crazy now! With what... 15 parts left?

Which is of course why I didn't go that route. Anyway, let's give Lois a little credit.

Sorry, he's still around in 11. <<ducking>>

Not kill! She was throwing a brick. Maybe I should have used this instead.

/pulls out Lex Lane/ "Art 8: Lois Lane is only allowed to kiss other men after she has become aware of Clark Kent if said Clark Kent is either aware of her actions, or aware that she is generally engaging in such activities and of able body and mind to interfere should he chose to do so."

Michael

Well, okay, Clark doesn't have a body, but he's still nagging (or someone with his voice is or Lois is imagining him doing that). Does that count?

Okay, you caught me. As long as the reader understands that from the beginning, I'm okay then, right? Right? Hello, Michael? Today, though, I think I'll go garden for a while, and get my snarkies out. Either that or L&C are going to spend all of Book 2 bickering, and it will end early with Lois shooting Clark or tearing his head off, and we don't want that to happen, right?

Yeah. It does. That's where the 'able mind' comes in. Cloned with his memory, ghost haunting Lois, possessing her body, sharing her body, dog sleeping in her bed, doesn't matter. Only once he's a braineating zombie, Lois is expected to move on and have Dan protect her. And once they escape the Clarkbie attack the first time, they have a night of passion and in the early hours of the morning, Dan goes out for bagels and gets his brains eaten by Clarkbie.

Tom Clancy didn't scare me off. Frank Herbert didn't scare me off. George R.R. Martin didn't scare me off. CarolM didn't scare me off. Janet Owens didn't scare me off. Nan didn't scare me off. You won't either

Prologue, epilogue. It always depends on the POV.

Great. Does that mean I'll get fined by the Extra Actor's Guild of Metropolis?

Ooooh! Ooooh! Ooooh! Makeup sex! Ooooh! Ooooh! Ooooh! Also, food for new, other story. Or many more other stories! Ooooh! Ooooh!

Michael

PS: Now I really have to go and work on Part 11 FDK.

I'm a little behind everyone else, as I just caught up to 10 while everyone else is on 12. But, I am trying to get up to speed with this episode.

The first thing that comes to mind is out of my real life. The living things that are not real, even though something in the back of your head tells you that it could be real reminds me of my mother's cooking. My mother was highly educated, but not much of a cook. She thought that a recipe was a suggestion. Any or all of the ingredients could be left out. As a result, it took till I went away to college for me to learn what real food tasted like. I think Lois is having the same problem. She has the main ingredient of her life stuck in the back of her head, but she cannot taste real life because it is missing in her existance.

It is kind of strange to learn just how undone Lois could be without Clark in her life to complete the picture. We all know that Lois is an incomplete package without Clark, but this story gets the point across in a way that most of us would not think of unless we saw how the missing ingredient made the end results different.

I like this, Virginia. Lois is not complete, regardless of who comes into her life to fill the void, unless she has Clark/Superman to fill in the vacant spaces. So, please let us see the whole recipe put together so that we can watch Lois live life the way it was meant to live.

Pat

Hi, Pat! I welcome readers at any time.

Wow, Pat! I didn't know we were syblings! My mom's the same way (I especially liked it when she left out all the ingredients for dinner and we ate scrambled eggs instead). I'm more of a baker than chef (I leave the real cooking up to my hubby.) Baking is a science, you fudge around (no pun intended) with the recipe it doesn't work the same. I like your analogy here. Lots of people say that the crust is their favorite part of a pie, but I believe that even they would agree that an apple pie without apples would not be the same.

As I keep telling my Betas, "It's A Wonderful Life", Clark Kent. More unraveling to come.

Why, thank you, Pat. Liking my stories is always accepted.

It's difficult to be a complete when you are missing the other half of your soul, which is why both canon Clark and canon Lois were lost until they found each other.