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See. It wasn't that bad. You knew it was coming, right? Right?

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Also, I've reworked my [i]Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Clark[/i] TOC, breaking up Book 2 into bite sized mini-stories (Story Arcs). I'll be continuing to update this as I have time. If you're ever curious how many parts I have in the "bank" (sent to Beta), I keep a running tally there. I'd love feedback on this new format as well, especially from anyone who didn't start reading this story when I first started posting it. Thank you.

What a nightmare for Lois. Does Clark really think he's just going to leave? I sure hope not.

Joan

So Lois is having memories of her life with her Clark and without him. And now she is living it again with the wrong Clark. And too much Jimmies.
It's too much conflicting information. She is going to have a memory overload!
No wonder the poor woman is going crazy.

The return of Herb... what surprises will it bring?

Andreia

Now the dreams are starting to flood Lois.

Lois knows the source of the problem with the heat.

I hope the realization that Lois still likes him gets Clark to move forward with his plan.

Well, if he had any intention of going with Wells, he certainly will not now. Lois needs Clark there more than ever.

With Lois' bizarre dreams coming through more, maybe she will be more ready to accept that Clark is from a different demension.

Maybe Wells will be able to tell Clark what is going on in this dimension. I doubt it though.

Clearly my sarcasm didn't shine through. Do you all think I'd make Lois go insane, again?

CLARK: You mean she isn't insane? She's sure acting like it.

Thank you all for reading. Be sure your safety harness is buckled securely and your pull bar is locked in plaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccceeeee.

Joan: Yes, Lois's life without Clark, especially without context, is a scary life indeed.

CLARK:

Well, in Lois's sanity defense, she does only believe that they are nightmares.

Yes, well, you all knew about too many Jimmy back in the two Jimmys arc.

Or insomnia.

LOIS: Can I blame this guy?

Speaking of Herb... Surprises? What surprises? Here, I'll let you have a sneak peek.

CLARK: You mean?!

EW:

CLARK:

EW: Hope that clears things up.

John: Flood? Hmmmm. Maybe.

If only she could remember properly what happened in that dream... it's... right... there... Drat!



CLARK: What? You, too. Why doesn't anyone believe me when I say I'd never leave Lois?

CANON LOIS: Gee, I have no idea.

CLARK: You mean, he left you? <<shakes head>> What an idiot? Tell me again, why you picked him over me?

CANON LOIS: I love him.

CLARK: Maybe she *is* insane.

LOISES:

LOIS: Well, it would mean he's as crazy as I am, so I guess we could be meant for one another in that sense.

Huh, are you crossing PM and Heatwave? Huh?

Why do you need a WHAM warning for Lois having graphic sex with Clark?

Huh? Did something happen during Nightfall? Rioting?

They are going to do tests.

Why is it always LexLabs. What about STAR Labs? Those that are *not* reporting directly to *Lex*.

Uuuu-kay?

Oops? Lex got Kryptonite?



What if the excess heat comes from the extraneous amount of people around in Metropolis due to the reduced amount of Darwinism in Metropolis since Superman arrived?

Really? *Really*?
ER: See? Defective.
LOIS: See? Still twice as smart as that hussy in that other place my Clark goes to with he wants his personal happy time.

But what about the elderly who will now die of heat strokes and the like?

Good thing Lex can make it so it never happened, huh?

Michael

Hi Virginia,

So we have:

1- the return of the dreams.

2- the return of Herb.

And now what?

3- The return of Tempus?

Or 3bis- The return of Cat from Paris?

Michael: Hmmm, everyone's caught up. Maybe I should go prep 64.
Not quite.



This is just a memory, but it's still possible to fix him.

LOIS: I've got a suggestion on how to do that.
Haven't read it. Does it have a similar theme? Jimbo's line also suggests worm sized.

LOIS: The one true act of philanthropy.



Yes, that's true. There was no reason for Nor, Zara, and Ching to stop by since Kal-El was dead.

Um... Didn't Lex bring it upon himself for his stupid exit plan?

Now, that's just being cruel. My Clark isn't THAT bad.

That's what I think.

Annnnnd?

CLARK: Well, she was!

LOIS:

CLARK: <<Groaning>> She was...



Which is why he repeats himself.

What? Herb doesn't count as a "source"?

CLARK: She is a woman, and I'm a man.

Sydney: Hi!

Yes. Although, to be fair, she's had some dreams before, but she's currently extra stressed and extra tired.

Oh dear, did Herb bring a hitch-hiker?

It's now November. Cat's been back for a while now, I just didn't mention it directly.

LOIS: I didn't miss her.

CAT: I've been here the whole time.

LOIS: Oh, have you been? I didn't notice.

CLARK: They're never going to be friends, are they?

Well, I have to say again that I don't think "Wrong Clark" is acting very wrong right now. Of course, the fact that canon-Lois was not suffering from dream/memories made canon Clark leaving a little easier.

Well, I am looking forward to the next installment. This was an informative segment, but not an enjoyable one.

Well, the seen of Lois feeling Clark's tie that she had called all wrong was enjoyable.

I basically read the flashback, maybe skipping a little of the scene with Ralph, but I would not say I enjoyed it.

Lois interpreting the incidents with Jimmy as marrying him was funny. The fact that that does not square with the later scenes where Luthor dies will probably make her even less likely to think these were memories and not dreams.

Would that be saying that Clark is becoming "less wrong" as the story progresses?

This part wasn't meant to be "enjoyable" but "uncomfortable"; sometimes a story is about pushing buttons you don't want pushed. There will be more of the stuff you like in 64 (At least, the stuff I think you like).

See, not all bad.

That was the "uncomfortable" part. That should be one of the most uncomfortable scenes (in that respect) for the rest of the story. Although, I may hit other buttons along the way. <<John pictures EW stepping into an elevator and pushing all the buttons up to the Penthouse.>>



Remember as we progress forward that back when she was shot, Lois recalled a "dream" where Clark had carried her over the threshhold. And back when she was hiding out from B39 (WAY back) in the hotel room, she had a flash of Jimbo and Cat and Perry making fun of her taking a day off at the Lexor Honeymoon Suite. Now, she's had another memory of HiM experience. So, this hasn't been her first memory dream.

Well, at some level Lois is accepting his actions as right.

On the other hand, he has changed to be more like canon Clark over time. Drinking pop and eating pie as time progresses.

I try to appreciate a variety of things, but some I do like more.

True. I went back and read much of the Two Jimmies arc again and noticed Lois had memories from PML in her first life there. And she did have the memory of how things went down the first time while she was in Trask's camp. Still, she has not had nearly as many memories as she did in "Another Lois".

Lois doesn't have the same "help" as she had in remembering things as she did in "Another Lois".

Although, won’t likely get to reading, let alone FDKing 64 today.

Oops?

He’s not into alien probing, is he?

I did have no idea who the 22 y/o blond guy was. Tempus just never figured in my mind

Michael

Your loss. 64 is where loop de loop begins and Clark sees where the roller coaster will take him before it comes to the end. You know, now that I've introduced the characters and all.

CLARK: Not that kind.

Who said anything about a 22 y/o guy?

And this is supposed to encourage me to read it, how?

Canon CLARK: Well, when I felt better I know I did my

The care and feeding of a clone shouldn't be left to someone who won't nuture it with love.

CLARK: She has problems?

You won't know how much fun until you read 64.

*End?* *END?* *EEEEEENNNNDDDD!!!!!* Michael

Otherwise why would I continue writing?

Not MY fault.

Guess I'll just keep writing then.

Something I'm surprised that Lex never thought of.