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This part is dedicated to all of you who wanted to know what would have happened next in 'Another Lois'.



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Yes! Closure!

So is Lex channeling Dan now? Lois doesn't answer the door, so he busts in uninvited? Too bad she didn't have a plunger handy.

Yay for Superman telling Lois who he is! Or starting to, at least. Fie on Luthor for interrupting. Couldn't he have arrived a few seconds later? Or never?

Enjoyable chapter, as always.

That was a fun peek into the ending of "Missing Lois". I wish Lois would just tell Clark what she was doing regarding Lex.

Joan

I have a fear this will be encoraging to the caller.

more fun dreams.

I guess this is not a flashback.

Why are they kissing as Superman and Lois if they are married?

Myabe this is her sub-conscience telling her this truth that her conscience has forgotten.

Interesting twist on the line.

Of course that avoids why he did not tell her sooner so they could get married sooner.

It does make sense, makes her less likely to mess up. Although if she is making out with him in the suit, or fingerin his arm like in "Sex, Lies and Videotapes", I am not sure it makes that much difference what she calls him.

This makes us sure it is a dream. Although with SM, maybe moving from one location to the other in a moment is possbile.

What happened to her? Did someone kidnap her?

After the Clark's voice part I figured this was a memory of after the end of "Another Lois".

So the nut is gaurding the nuthouse?

Hmm, I figured things had already re-set by this point.

I think maybe you want to say "hold of the straps".

Superman has returned.

He was so close, and is interrupted again. I am beginning to wonder if he will ever tell her.

I now dislike Lex even more.

Oh, I was hoping she would not respond to Luthor's demands.

He assumes she is available at the last moment. Or is he trying to catch her with Clark?

more annoying actions by Lex. Why does he think he can show up if someone was not coherent enough to talk with him on the phone.

Not only did she hang up on him, she did not recognize his voice at all.

Fortunantly she seems to have not done that.

She is going to worry about what she did say.

Instead of just recognizing she was in no mood to talk to him.

she could have said she had a brunch with a source.

Stop accepting those false leads Lois.

Now he will think he can always get his way if he badgers her enough.

I guess the way Luthor said it it really did not sound like information to anyone but Lois.

Clearly he is still hurt by how Lana treated him.

Luthor is all over the place in this sotry.

I think this would work better "hadn't showed up." It just seems a bit awkward with the have in there.

Which is why he came right over when she did not answer his phone call?

she is thanking him.

So far Lois having a pretend relationship with Luthor has just opened Superman up to more ridicule.

Considering how she reacted to seeing Superman, no, not at all.

I really dislike Luthor.

that he thinks this.

This is true, but I hope Lois lied about the hospital.

Even if she can't convince him that the curse is false, I don't see her ever being able to leave him.

I am so glad that it appears he is right, at least for this go around. S

I wish he had more hope.

He should trust that she will be safe at her place. Luthor is not that unethical.

Couldn't he show the birth certificate for the Clark in this dimension. It would help a lot to have a state ID.

But not having an ID can be very problematic.

more ways for his to not see Lois.

I guess this makes sense but it seems border-line misuse of funds to use it to fix his girlfriends apartment.

Or maybe he should just move in with Lois so next time there will be no walls to stop him.

The situation does make sense with that explanation.

It was to real to her to consider the hidden meanings.

Hmm, although if this is what actually happened, then maybe it was the use of octopus to start with that was subconscious.

I think that should be "Superman's existence".

Well, since she does know that CK=SM, he really does not have to worry about that. Although since he does not know it, he still does.

Lois:Mostly. He might even be more glad if he knew I know they are just sides, and not different people.

Mostly, especially when she forgets that he does not know she knows.

One of them really needs to tell the other.

If he does not tell Lois soon he might figure out she knows. Although none of her actions clearly point that way, at least if you start by assuming she does not know.

I am glad he notices that. Although clearly some of it was fully a dream.

To really understand it he would have to do indepth interviews with her about her dreams, which she might not be willing to do.

Although since he is Superman his ability to remember his dreams might not be relevant at all.

2 points for Clark.

But maybe Herb did not know as much as he thought.

From what Herb did know it seems that he was using the term to mean "in a relationship".

It is a bit far fetched. ALthough, I guess that is mainly just a reflection of "Just Say Noah". Although it is possible that even with out SM Smiley's plan would have failed, but once it exists nothing really seems far fetched.

But the world crashing reality is one that lacks a flying man. That is why Lois was put away (although Clark has never really been told that detail).

I was hoping they would get a chance to really talk.

He could hang out in the sky and see her from afar, and just happen to walk by as Clark.

So she won't be mad if he stays around.

This almost seems incriminating evidence against Luthor, although I can see why Clark does not try to use it, after Lois getting mad at him for trying to blame Luthor one too many times.

Actually, it just might work. As long as he was willing to actually stop hovering.

True, she might get mad about it. But wonldn't it allow him to trust her more?

she never got to talk with Superman about what she learned. She needs to set up regular meeting times with him.

Good that she does not like Luthor barging in.

Obviously, although he was stalling. If he had just said it all in one breath he would have beat Luthor's knock.

Under the circumstances her actions seem reasonable, and not really deceptive. Although maybe she should have said "Superman, I know your Clark", instead of saying it was not them who got married. I can see why she didn't, but wish she had.

Yep, I think she is on the right track there.

I think it is time for her to tell him.

Now if Clark ever recovers his memory of his abduction maybe they can connect the dots.

Even if Lex was not a criminal, he is so arrogant and not valuing Lois' opinion, I do not see why she would ever stick with him.

The servants seems the better choice, but Lois thinking through both terms is telling.

Clark would have set it all up himself.

How is it a picnic with a butler?

Why do I have doubts that she is seeing the real Lex?

This plan seems more complicated and drawn out than Clark's reveal the truth to Lois plan.

I would say she is not exactly doing that. She could turn him down more often then she does for example.

If only Clark would realize this.

Quote]he had no interest in getting to know the man any better than she did already.[/Quote]

I wish Clark realized this too.

It would help a lot if she could make Clark see this.

I got some good Muse feeding FDK last night [img]http://tinyurl.com/cmlq5zn[/img] (I love that smilie!), so I think I'll respond before posting tonight to let you all know how much I appreciate you for continuing to read my story.


Joan: Thanks for popping in to let me know I haven't scared you away. /psst. "Another Lois". Actually that's just a nickname; it's full legal name is: "Wrong Trilogy: Book 1: Another Dimension, Another Time, Another Lois", so I guess we could technically call it WTB1:ADATAL for short, but "Another Lois" is so much easier to spell. /

Note to self: Find title to Book 3 that has neither Lois nor Clark in the title. sort of way. That would deviate from what's left of my skeleton outline.


John: Thank you for your wonderful FDK. I'll try to get to some of it tonight, but I figured you'd rather have me post 112 first.

John: Sorry about not getting to this last night. My eyelids would not participate after I posted my story. Thank you so much for your comments.
LEX: A-ha! A challenge!

No, not entirely. It counts, and speak for yourself. That's *my* Lois.

Lois isn't used to speaking of SM as CK.

SM has always (mostly) said that he wants Lois and Clark to be together, so he wouldn't be happy for them. Now, finally, Lois will leave him alone to move on with his life as a lonely martyring hero. No?

Yes, it would be difficult to get away with that without revealing that she knows. Not impossible, but difficult.
CLARK: Impossible.
HERB: I *do* hate that word.
CLARK: Oh, shut up!

As Herb didn't know that Another Lois could really hear Clark's voice (he thought it was part of her insanity), and never told Clark that Lois had ended up in an insane asylum, it's doubtful. She's already shared "visions" of Clark not being there, when Jimmy didn't survive the Messenger Hangar explosion and the deaths of the people on the Prometheus. He knows she has memories of her life with the other CK/SM, and maybe possible life without either of them, but he's not sure and he really doesn't want to a) think about this is detail, or b) probe her to think more of this in detail.

Never did I. This was a freebee from my muse.

Although I have a draft of the scene where Clark learns that she knows (actually, it was one of the first things I wrote for this story), I cannot recall if those words are used. It will become official that she knows at some point in the story.

How did I guess that this might be your reaction?

And let him (try to) break down her door?

Possibly both.

LEX: I thought she had been drugged. I was worried about her safety. If anyone is going to drug Lois, it will be me!
SM: Excuse me?
LOIS: What he said.
LEX: Er... drugs as in medicine.
LOIS: I'm not sick, you are.

There are times when I answer the phone and cannot recognize my own sisters' voices, especially when they say something generic.

What Lois said to Lex is what she said in the Part, but the Readers know more than Lois.

LEX: That doesn't make sense. Why wouldn't she want to talk to me?

That wasn't the point. She shouldn't *have* to lie. Saying she wants to be alone should be enough.
LEX: I don't understand. Why would she want to do boring stuff like be by herself instead of being with me?

Doesn't canon Lex act the same way?

I guess those are good answers, but why are they even traveling by air instead of just hiding out in a nice bedroom.

Hmm, on second thought, this seems like what they should have had happen in "Soul Mates" or "Brutal Youth" on the trip to Hawaii they should have taken.

Although why Clark dresses as Superman to go to Hawaii is odd. a-it is not like he can show up as such at the hotel, so he will have to change back. b-if someone actually sees them leave or takeoff, it seems that Lois in SM's arms ON HER WEDDING NIGHT, will be more problematic than Clark seen flying. I guess maybe, there is a slight possibility that if people just vaguely see SM flying they will a-not realize who that women he is lip to lip with or b-if they are really lucky, not notice he has a women in his arms at all.

-- Continuation of Response to John's FDK --
Sorry about the delay, but RL got in the way.
LOIS: I already told Lex that I cannot accept gifts from him, so why would he... Right, he's Lex.
LEX: What? I'm supposed to listen to her? Phishaw. She doesn't know what she's talking about.



And you'd be right. Fixed.

He'd just be glad he wouldn't have to worry about an explosion, right?

Yes, I wonder what would happen if he just started acting like she knows.

Yes, some dream, some reality.

That and she doesn't know why he would be doing this.

True.

CLARK: Does that mean I win?
LOIS: No.
LEX: Hardly.
LOIS: He's got more point than your negative 36, Lex.

He didn't.

Interesting theory.

HERB: It wasn't germain. Clark came, therefore, Lois won't miss her Clark. All's well with this dimension, right?

He'd have to find her first.

Still a bit creepy.

How is Luthor incriminating himself by telling Superman not to use his x-ray vision to watch Lois in the shower?

CLARK: I thought she liked the hovering.
LOIS: Flying yes, hovering no.

But it implies that she'd be getting into trouble in which she needs SM's help to get out of... And she doesn't admit to that.

Well, he started to, but then paused because he thought she was going to interrupt, so when he realized Lois wasn't going to interrupt, he started again and that's when Luthor banged on the door.

She wants to give him to trust her enough to confess it without her telling him that she's knows first.



Well, he did this in canon when he took her to Italy for dinner without informing her of their destination first.

Much more romantic with Clark.

Picture from Downton Abbey picnic, S3: Picnic = eating outdoors.

LEX: Because she has to undress me to see that.
LOIS: Octopus! Octopus! Octopus!

TEMPUS: Those good guys are such horrible planners.

She turns him down, and he wants her even more.

LOIS: So, you're saying that Clark doesn't believe me when I say I love only him? Men! They never listen.

Oh dear.

Michael

It still looks fishy, using the "for charity" Superman Foundation to fix up his girlfriends apartment.

He's admitting that using special abilities to be a voyeur has crossed his mind.

Another big problem with "barbarians at the Planet", Lois did not go immediately ballistic about Lex's proposal, and considered it at all, when he was so condescending towards her.

Actions speak louder than words. Lois's actions don't really suggest loving Luthor, just being a greedy women who is willing to two-time her man if the other man offers her enough goodies.

Darth Michael: Hi! I think I can sneak one in before bedtime.
LOIS: How much harder to get do I have to play?

CLARK: I'm okay with that sentence. Sounds good to me. *Here*, okay?



LOIS: <<giggling>> I looked there too, but there was still too much fabric for my tastes.

CLARK:

What?! You wanted a fantasy dream? Hmmm. I guess I could write one of those... or two... to tide the readers over.

Better the enemy that loves you than the enemy which just drowns you.

LEX: Who?
LOIS: No.

LOIS: And? Do I need to draw you a diagram? Fine! First, the cape and shorts get folded and set on the chair...

CLARK: Hmmmm. This seems to be a theme for this part. Did I do bad?

CLARK:

Thank you, Jason Trask. Next...

Hey! At least it wasn't Jimmy.

LOIS: Gentlemen? Gentlemen? I don't see any gentlemen callers around here, do you?

LEX: /glances at their fingernails/
CLARK: /busts out x-ray vision to make sure she's not hiding any more non-gentlemen callers around/

Tab? Do you have a cold, Michael?

LEX: Well, I have been known to cause that sort of jealousy before.

Suction cups included?

CLARK: Of course! That's why.

So, Lois doesn't consider herself a lady?

Sadly, that happened on the George Reeves AoS show and a fake Superman came and stole a little girl away. Since then, Superman doesn't encourage this sort of behavior.

LEX: A busy one. Not all of us can say that, can we?
CAT: I can!

Um... that first time Superman tried to dump Lois and Lex caught it over the speakerphone?

DAN: Hey!
CLARK: See, whack job.

CLARK: With Luthor, you never know.

Was this recently? Before that she wanted Superman to peek, right?

LEX: I like to live simply.

LEX: She's lucky it's not hunting season.
NIGEL: Duck season.
ASABI: Rabbit season

LOIS: Exactly!

LOIS: The only thing I'm crushing is the antacids for the sour stomach you cause me.

Until tomorrow.

But *nobody* knows that CK=SM and therefore that SM is fixing his girlfriend's window!

HENDERSON: I know.
PERRY: Me, too.
M&J: We do!
CARLOS: As do I.

SM: Sadly, that evidence isn't allowable in court.

LEX: Hey, I'm rich. It tends to make women forget their ethics.

LOIS: Only from a very narrow POV. If Clark truly loved me, he'd now what I was doing! It's obvious! Well, hopefully, not to Lex...
LEX: You're holding out for more jewelry?
CLARK: That sounds about right.
LOIS: Why do I love you again, Clark?

LEX: That’s funny. I thought the same about me and Lois.
SUPERMAN:

Maybe if she did a nationwide televised address, maybe on Jack Lemo, on how she would never, ever, not even if the fate of the Planet depended on it, engage in carnal relations with Lex Luthor.
LEX: So, if I buy the Planet and threaten to close it down if she won’t marry me…?
LOIS: He doesn’t know just how much a woman’s interest in sex with her husband drops after the marriage, does he?

A bit hard up, isn’t he?



Looks they’re a matched pair when it comes to hard-upitiness.

What? What?
TEMPUS: Let Gramps be. He’s not done a single bad thing against society.

LOIS: /makes vow to get back at EW for this/

Michael

CAT: It's because he's so small.
SUPERMAN: Oh, I get it now. Poor fellow.

LEX: Yes, he said that he loved Lois. Can't get less manly than a whipped hero, can you?
LOIS: /fans self/ I don't know. I thought he was *very* manly.

MRS. COX: No, he likes it dirty.

LEX: /brings out crossbow/ Lois, my *dear*, it's hunting season.

So, he's infertile?

I think she’s concentrating on the wrong aspect here…

Yes. It means she only has to put out for him once and then he’ll leave her alone.
LEX: Or kill her.

I don’t think she’s going to take long until she combusts.

Michael

LOIS: It doesn't matter how big or small Lex is, he's never going to touch this /points to self/

LOIS: Don't worry, Lex, after that one time, I'm sure to kill myself.

But that would ruin the surprise! It'll arrive when you're least expecting it.
LOIS: Oh. So, now!
EW: Or, not.

Ooops. I forgot who we were talking about. So, Tempus is Trask's great-great-great grandson.
TRASK: I wouldn't say he's that good.
TEMPUS: I killed Superman.
TRASK: I stand corrected.

CLARK: That'd be awkward!