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Great as always. Still very frustrating though. Ugh. Clark is getting more and more paranoid about Lois and her actions. Lois is getting herself too deep into far to many investigations and having no time to spend with Clark. Time which would, hopefully soothe his fears, if they could ever manage to connect.

I hope they do get some private time together soon, I hope Clark attempts to tell her again soon.

And it's been too long since we've see a kiss. I need a kiss.

This was a very emotionally tough instalment.

Clark seems to understand Lex speak better than Lois. He knew when Lex told her "I got something for you", he really meant a thing, not inforamtion. The watch clearly presents them in a dating relationship.

To me accepting Luthor's watch seems a step too far. Lois may try to say "it is not big deal to LEx", but the key to understanding inapropriate compromising gifts is not the giver but the receiver. For Lois that watch is worth a very substantial amount of money, so it is a big deal.

I also totally see Clark's view that it is disturbing that Lois is telling important things to Luthor before telling them to him, like the history of her watch. Especially since she chose to go to the brunch with Luthor.

It did seem a little unfair that he was so hard on her about not calling. However since he does not know she knows his lines made sense. It is also disturbing how he worries so much about her not being mad about his running off.

His turning down Lois's request to meet with Superman seems a bit much. He has taken self-jealousy to a new extreme. However I do have to say Lois' description of the matter as being "private" did not do much to make that more likely, especially since the last time she saw SM she kissed him profusely. In fact in light of how Clark is likely to understand that incident, it totally makes sense he is jealous.

On the other hand, I think Clark should have made sure to tell Lois upfront about the Muldoon investigation and Cat's involvement. I just have a feeling that his failure to tell Lois about it is going to come back to bite him.

I have to swecond the view that we have gone too long without Clark and Lois kissing. Lois kissing Superman does not count, even if she knows that it counts he does not know that it counts, and for now it is driving a wedge between them.

I am glad that Clark seems to have moved beyond the view that Lois is cheating on him. They really need to talk.

LoLex? Cute Love the Elvis references too.


Joan

I wonder whether Lois is going to call Clark on his Elvis blunder. And what would he say if she did? "Well, where I come from, Elvis is still around and is a former US president." That wouldn't really fly unless he's feeling like explaining a lot more than that.

When Clark noticed Lois's new watch, I was thinking that it probably has a bug in it. I'm glad she had it checked for kryptonite and that they took the tracking device out, but bugs weren't mentioned. Can we assume that if there was a bug that Star Labs would have found it? Or do I need to worry about everything that Lois says potentially being overheard?

I third the request for more kissing. And for less fraternizing with the enemy and more fraternizing with the pseudo-non-semi-boyfriend.

I have to agree with the last two requests.

However my reading of the STAR labs investigation is just that they "recorded the signal" not that they disabled it. I would not think that Lois would have then disable the signal. She is putting on a face of trusting Lex, so disabeling the signal might clue him into the fact that she knows more than she is letting on.

On the issue of LoLex, I have to say I mainly find it disturbing, since it looks like a contraction of Lois and Lex.

Thank you all for chiming in and letting me know you're still reading. First, I want to clarify a few misnomers: Clark didn't decline to pass on Lois's meeting request to Superman. Lois said it was 'private' because they were standing in the newsroom and she didn't want to discuss the topic there, and Clark misunderstood. Then she postponed it (because of Eugene), so Clark reassured her that he hadn't told Superman her request yet. Secondly, just because Clark thinks Rolex when he sees the "LoLex" watch, doesn't mean that it's the same thing. It's not (see disclaimer thingy ). Thirdly, Lois *didn't* have S.T.A.R. Labs remove the tracking device.


KatherineKent: Thank you.
I get your frustration and understand it. My apologies.

Hmmmm. Kissing? Huh. I'll look into that.


John: Thank you for the comments.
Was it? I thought it was quite funny with the Elvis scene, but I've got a dark sense of humor... and I know what the future will bring...

Hopeful? More like blindly naive.

I guess this makes sense, so I guess I will say that at one level her accepting the watch works. Still, it in no way lessens the hurt it causes Clark, or the fact that he distruts her now because of it.

it still seems a bit far for undercover Lois to go unless she wants to be actually seen to be in a relationship with Lex and also maybe be seen as for sale to the highest bidder.

Clark:And she knew I was about to have a very important conversation with her, but no, she choses to go off with Lex instead.

Although I really see no way for her to have avoided learning CK=SM this long, so that is a super-counter factual situation.

He should be more worried, and try to figure out what it means.

And since then she has chosen Luthor over him, one time specifically because he "had something for her". That is not the actions of love, at least not unless you know what is really going on, and she has not told him at all that she does not trust Luthor.

It seemed for a bit he was convinced she had cheated with Luthor, when she first mentioned the line "it's OK to cheat on your husband".

He’s not happy. And Lois is currently under cover, so she can’t make it up to him in a marital kind of way.

Yes.

/whispers/ ‘the’ is missing.

Oh my. He doesn’t know about his safety deposit box, does he?

Michael

LOIS: And what he did to me by not telling me about his secret and breaking my heart and then comforting me with his alter-ego wasn't at all something which would make me distrust him and wasn't at all hurtful.
CLARK:

LOIS: And Clark hasn't told me all his little secrets either!

CLARK: Well, at first, but then I realized she hadn't done that. She's just playing us off one another for some reason. I think she's trying to make me jealous.

LOIS:

Darth Michael: You're catching up!

She could. But he doesn’t want her too. Or is he referring to the fact that he requires a 48-hour love-fest to make up for it and since she’d be dead within 24 hours, she’s not be able to make it up to him?
LOIS: Well, if he’s that petty and discriminating, I wouldn’t want to make it up to him, anyway.

LEX: See, Superman? /points at television/ She’s bound on the bed in my room in the Swiss Alps.
SUPERMAN: What’s that green shimmer in the room.
LEX: Umm… The Aurora Borealis.
SUPERMAN: LOIS!



Michael

To be fair, he stopped you from having sex with his alter-ego. If he had not done that, this would be a much different story. Although, I think he would be in much bigger trouble.

A little bit of both.
LOIS: What? Only 48 hours? No, he needs at least a week to make up to me.
CLARK: Okay, but it has to be on a deserted island because I'll need to recharge at some point.

LOIS: Um... okay. Much rather be rescued first. But I guess if he unties these binds, I *could* rescue him.
CLARK: Untie? Why would I want to do that?
LOIS: /realizes that Clark is color blind and thinks that green looks like red and vice-versa, so he thought he was exposed to green kryptonite and instead was exposed to red./ Well, at least shut off the camera first, so Lex can't see us.
LEX: Don't worry, I'd gouge my eyes out first... well, afterwards.

So, if Eugene killed Harrison AFTER he was found alive, could he not be charged with the crime under Double Jeopardy rules, even if he was cleared of all charges, because he had once been found guilty of all charges?

JIMMYS: What? Seriously? You think WE could afford her?

Good point. But she didn't know in advance who the benefactor was.

At this rate, probably.

Yes, it might.
CLARK: Yeah, cause Lois would be dead and I'd be in jail for boinking her to death.
LOIS: I don't think that's what John meant.

No, I don't believe either of those would have happened. Although Lois might be in prison for killing Clark. Although, I doubt that, but it would be a much higher angst story (as hard as that is to believe).

Michael

Just so as you all realize that I could have been much more cruel to my characters.

Well, you could always read Sue S's story about Las Vegas again.
CLARK: No, no, no! I said nothing about a cave. DESERTED Island. Palm trees. Beach. Sunshine. Clothing optional.

JIMMYS: Um... that was a compliment.

Michael