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See, I told you LoLex was no Rolex.

Comments appreciated and gobbled up like chocolate cake with chocolate frosting.

Well, at least they are talking. I still wish they were touching.

That would be below his level of dealing with anyone.

He was trying to mark her on multiple levels.

See this is why it is driving Clark so crazy.

Clark:It looks like a luxury item to me. It is more than I could afford to give Lois, especially these days, after being robbed so many times.

Somehow I do not see that really changing Clark's reaction much.

Only a slight exageration.

So is this Jason's father or brother?

Interesting development.

Still, quite expensive.

Interesting development.

This story is really focusing a lot on watches.

they are alone together again.

I figured that was what he meant even before he brought it up.

more time together. Although with the watch between them and him no longer wanting to tell her the Secret, I am torn by it.

at no kissing.

that they had a falling out.

that she shut the door in his face.

I think you want to say "landlord must have let". Or I guess you could shorten it to "must've".

I think you want to say "for a short".

I like how we get better continuity with changes in one episode still affecting things from other episodes.

I hope Superman stops by while she is not wearing the watch.

I was more wondering if it could pinpoint what room in her apartment she was in. That seems more Luthor's style.

Somehow I think this would sound better as "vigilant with strangers".

But the easier she makes it, the quicker he is in place to get caught, and the sooner she gets her investigation done, and the sooner she can be fully back in Clark's arms. So shouldn't she not try to resist?

That is, if the planet he came from HAD a Rolex.

Except then they were not both thinking the other might be close to cheating on them, and they were not pretending not to be madly in love with eachother.

So is she not wearing the watch, or has he managed to ignore it?

I was so hoping he would conveniently forget this date.

Yes, what exactly should he not tell Linda?

Or Lois could give him a wallet. Maybe then he would be less mad about her getting a watch from Luthor.

Do it, do it, do it.

Her knowing but not officially is really dragging out a long time.

He should use this to get a drivers license and other forms of ID. It is the only way they will be able to get married.

I think you want to say "where had he gotten".

Well, she was right that it was real.

Her memories of the way things were are coming back to help her.

More protesting too much.

I think that should be "Fire Cpatain in charge of the scene".

Why is he being intentionally difficult?

At least they are working together. I still wish it was more.

I like how we see how Lois thinks and acts here. It is a very good explanation of Lois' actions.

Lois:Well, Clark dating her is also part of the investigation.

Clark:Sort of like you dating Luthor.

Lois:Exactly, this is all part of the investigation.

Clark:Even taking the watch?

Lois:I don't care about the watch. It has a tracker in it, I am using it to let Lex thing I trust him, he is going to mess up.

Reader:OK, maybe I am just too hopeful things will resolve.

He should just kiss her to distract her.

She does have a point. The robbers acted to make sure that Linda got the story, but at the same time did not have to deal with the police.

Clark is building up Lois' theory.

Clark:Hmm, so dating her is not likely to get her attacked?

I guess Perry was not there in the taxi hearing Lois's attacks on Linda, but still.

Wait, has she burned something down in the past? Is Lois inplying Linda started the hotel fire?

That was always a major question in "The Rival", how did people abandon the "Daily Planet" so quickly?

Lois needs to learn to stop two-timing people.

He really is thinking that Lois is willing to use her influence and dating Lex to get just about anything.

Although if she was cheating with Lauderman before Harrison died, why would anyone expect a grieving widow at all?

I am surprised that Lois "bought with a watch" Lane's claims about "morals" did not get a scoff from Clark.

How did the Planet miss this one?

Interesting place for her to bring that up.

Go with Lois Clark, go with Lois.

Interesting. In canon he was only give a life sentance, not the death penalty.

Why Star labs? It seems they know it was cut without doing that.

I still wish they would not spend so much time apart.

they are touching. We really need more touching. They are too distant.

I am really glad she managed to tell him this. It would make him worry less, except since his main worry is Luthor and not Superman, it won't really help much.

If she did not know the Secret, she would be on the verge of determining it.

Well, at least he called himself the current boyfriend, but does he believe it?

Actually, it would have probably been much better than what actually happened.

I have to agree it is really hard to trust Lois in this case.

Stop procrastinating Clark.

I hope he does not wimp out, but no longer am really counting on it.

John: Thank you for the FDK.
But she told him she couldn't accept expensive items from people she reported on.

LEX: Doesn't every woman want to have a Lex on them?

LOIS: He really needs to get control of that jealous streak and trust me more.

LOIS: You can give me love, which is much more valuable than anything Lex could ever give me.
CLARK: Well, when she puts it that way...

CLARK:

Father. I thought it looked weird to have Lois say the "old man", she's more PC than that.

It wasn't supposed to. Sorry.

Well, Clark did open his mouth and accuse Lois of selling out for a watch.

She is Mad Dog Lane and Clark did do the above.

Thanks. Fixed.

That one's fixed too. Thanks.

Thank you. Since this is all one story the continuity is supposed to be there. (Okay, the same could be said of a TV show...)

But Lois said for Clark NOT to have Superman stop by, because Mr. Law and Justice would take Eugene to jail.

If it could tell if Lois was in her apartment or at the landlord, it could also tell which room of her apartment she was in.

I changed it to "vigilant for strangers" since I already have another 'with' in the sentence.

But she doesn't want it so easy, that Eugene is caught in her apartment, or that the Voyeur sees another man staying at her apartment and she loses her source completely.

Hence the 'almost'. He's trying to be optimistic here.

CLARK: Gee, thanks for reminding me!

So, we should just let Carpenter run the DP into the ground?

I'm sorry Spoilage Police have notified me that my previous sentence might have been too revealing. My apologies.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Christina: Hey! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you're still reading! I hope you and the little one(s) are doing well.
Not necessarily; Lois think that he's confused Rolex with something else, because he's new to the planet Earth.

LOIS: What? It could happen.

CLARK: :rolleyes: She really doesn't understand me at all, does she?

Thanks for the comment!

That would only matter if Lex actually listened to Lois, which he really doesn't.

That is becoming progressively harder the more it looks like she is actually dating Luthor.

But it would be much less confusing for us.

Well the plot for the last 20+ parts has been heavily driven by a watch, and Lois getting this one has just increased that.

It could be, but Lois and Clark really was not, although they were not nearly as bad as some shows. In a lot of ways Season 1 was the worst in lack of continuity, although some later episodes, like "Top Copy" and maybe in some ways "That Old Gang of Mine" seem to just be ignored in plot development and character development.

Oh, is that why she didn't want Superman to come by. Still, I think it would do Clark good to see her without the watch.

It's not my fault Lois chose to accept such an expansive and flashy gift.

I was hoping I would really learn something.

/paraphrases/ Linda is a no-nonsense reporter who will stop at nothing to get the story printed first. She has drive, unbridled sexual energy and knows how to network.
CLARK: So, she’s like a more sociable version of Lois?

The one that’s not for sale in retail stores? The one Lex had custom made for his future fiancée so she can count the hours until she’s sharing his bed?

LEX: We’re doing the tattoo on the honeymoon and the branding for the first anniversary.
ARI: And two years later you get the divorce and a building with your name on it.

CLARK: Duh! Cooties!

/googles/ Wow, custom made watches really do retail between 300 and 1600 bucks.

Right. The spacefaring alien would confuse a Rolex chron-keeper able to tell the spacetime (sic) from here to Kessel up to a precision of 12 parsecs (sic) with the cheap knock-off hawked off the back of a truck by the local mob-boss. No wonder Linda gets all the scoops.
CLAUDE: You referring to se blonde pute who seduced moi and stole mon story?

He going to go after her chocolate icecream?

So, they’re putting the conversation off until after the wedding in May? (L&L’s that is)

But Clark looks so adorable in a dress.

Good for her. As if she would sell for 500$. That gets you just 15 minutes in the honeymoon suite’s bed with her. And the bra stays on.

Oooh! The one to her CCTV equipment?

LOIS: *No,* Mother, I did not fail to invite you to my engagement party with the convicted killer. And I’m not planning to, either. Have an engagement. Not not-invite you. … *know* that there’s only so many men out there. … No, I *do* not think time is running out. … If Lucy wants to be first to give you a granddaughter that’s fine by me. … No, I’m not sleeping with the local mob-boss, either.

How’s she going to smuggle that one past Superman once he moves in with her?
SUPERMAN: Ooooh, is that the Women’s Mudwrestling Channel?

Well, depends on the equipment. Google maps now has indoor maps, too, for museums and stuff.



So, Lex had a random person on the street kidnapped and killed and thrown into the river with his wallet on them for everyone he had disposed of?

Michael

I think that should be "sulk in the kitchen".

I think that should be "abduction and the". Either that or you could replace between with from.

I think since you made the headlights specific and not general it should be "doe caught by the headlights of Lois's".

LEX: Huh? Sorry, I wasn't listening.

LOIS: Hence "Trust".

CLARK: Oh, dear. There's Lois getting in trouble again. :rolleyes:

To try and distance himself from his alter ego, he decided he didn't need to get a quote, since Lois was there.

CLARK: error finder.

Darth Michael: Only 10+ left to go to catch up.
HENDERSON: I'm sorry, Clark doesn't know this information for a few more parts.

LOIS: There's a doubt in your mind?
CLARK: No doubts in my mind.

Ooops.

SUPERMAN: How did she know about that girl in Arizona?.... er... I mean, 'no comment.'

But it's not normal to take a sub-machine gun to them in the office.
LEX: It's not?

Um... they couldn't, because it would be burned down.

SUPERMAN: Lois, I can explain...

But then they all would have gotten motion sick.

LEX: Hey, now. There's a good idea. Nigel!
NIGEL: Already on it, sir.
LEX: Oh, good.

That's a good one!
SAM: Ellen!
ELLEN: What? It's not like you were around.

LOIS: I don't boink anyone to *borrow* their car.
CLARK: So, no boinking to fly Superman Express. I'm glad to hear that, Lois.
LOIS: I didn't say *that*!

CLARK: Um... Michael, don't you have that backwards?

I think the way they tell it in canon, it seems that Lois went to the Congo there too, but there she came back. I always figure Clark had something to do with that, even if inadvertently.

Hmmm, they never actually say that Clark had not seen Lois before they meet at the planet. Hmmm.

This scenario has been addressed in several stories, but I've never read one where Linda went off to the Congo INSTEAD of Lois and ended up dying.

There. There. I’m worried, too. /talks to self like the little engine that could/



*G*

Oh boy.



/points at dozens of times Lois had to rescue the big strong super man/
Actually, isn’t it funny how often he has performance issues? Just like with the Enterprise, when her shields, engines, or phasers are on the fritz right when the bad alien of the week shows up.

Does that qualify as an oops?

Lois, if she has a say-so.
LUCY: I’ll vote ‘yes’, too.

Michael

Maybe the Carlin Building was named after Old Man Carlin, and Lex was just getting his last revenge on the old man for having left it to charity and not his daughter.

I'll take my inspiration where I can get it. Just a little bit a day and surely I'll catch up by the end of the year, right? :rolleyes:

It's so nice of Clark to want to clone himself so that he can make love to Lois as both Superman and Clark at the same time.
CLARK: So much for being evil.

Except in this story I changed the Carlin building to Carlen.

Michael

Is that the one where the woman dresses like a man?

/I think you mean 'Lucy'/ Or did you mean that Lois is assuming his protest over wording means he isn't protesting meaning?
SUPERMAN: Of course, I wouldn't do it with your sister, Lois. Remember, I'm Mr. No-Relationship guy.
LUCY: You mean, Superman is a... a...
LOIS: Very patient man. Not so much.
SUPERMAN: What? Yes, I am. No, wait. No, I'm not. I mean. Look 10 car pile-up! Phew.

LOIS: Great. Now, add one Lex Luthor...
CLARK: Lois!
LOIS: But if he's still alive when the mudslide strikes, it's a natural disaster not murder, right?
LEX: