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Comments again please. So, is he in trouble or not?

P.S. You forgot to put a little blue arrow next to the chapter... just thought I'd let you know.

I don't know if she'll figure it out or not, but he's definitely in trouble.

Well, okay, given the title, she's probably going to figure it out. Or he'll get uncomfortable that she's playing out a fantasy about someone else, and tell her.

LOL! Looks like Lois is about to get the biggest clue of her life!

<In sternest mother voice musterable> All right, young lady. You get back here this instant and finish what you started! </mother voice> No? Oh, darn. That voice always works with my son.

How about if I ask nicely: Please? Pretty please?

All this is to say that I am enjoying the story immensely and am eager for the finale.

Joy,
Lynn

Yea for Clark for not letting him being dressed as Clark from stopping him being the hero on the beach. I'm amazed he kept his glasses on in the surf and managed to style his hair, so that it wasn't slicked back.

For a second there I thought Lois was going to put the blanket on him when she got on the trash cans. At least she waited for the privacy of their room.

You know, if Clark *wasn't* Superman, I think he might become kind of annoyed by Lois constantly shoving him into the role of her favorite hero. I was a bit surprised that he didn't opt out of the wet S t-shirt and return to his other t-shirt after the rescue (or no shirt at all). Also, what was Clark wearing when they went to the beach? You mention he had his jacket tied around his waist when they returned to the room, and that he was wearing red shorts (I'm picturing 1960s style shorty swim shorts here - especially with Lois associating the shorts and blue shirt together - but you probably mean knee-length khakis type shorts, right? In Red, though?) I'm having difficulty picturing his professional attire he wore to the meetings before their lunch. I figured he had been in slacks. Were the red shorts under his slacks? Or did he go back to the room to change, and if he did, why did he bring a jacket? It wouldn't have been cold.

Poor Clark. Trying to make their relationship romantic and Lois isn't quite there yet. I hope she doesn't lay into him with her realization because... well, it's his birthday. She can yell at him the next day.

One thing confused me though, in this part:
Why wouldn't he already be strapped in, being that everyone is supposed to be buckled in at the beginning of the flight? Clark's the type of guy not to unbuckle his seat belt during the flight, so why would this be surprising to Lois? If this were before they took off, yes, I could understand Lois's surprise that he was already buckled in, but at the end of the flight that he was *still* using his seat belt shouldn't have surprised her. /also, you're missing a paragraph break after this line/

I'm curious how you'll have Clark escape revealing himself now that Lois has given him a cape.

Oooh! I just love this part!

Poor Clark is not going to be able to wiggle out of this situation!

Oops! Did I just write wiggle?

I like that she's making Clark into the superhero for her own reasons, little knowing that he already *is* the superhero!

Well done! Please post more soon.

Clark rescued someone as Clark. This is why we love the L&C Clark, because other Clark's would have changed to SM for even such a simple rescue.

I don't think he has a chance to save his secret now.

Lois wants to turn Clark into Superman.

Andreia

Thanks. So you think Lois is horny? Well, she has been ogling Clark quite openly and memorizing the view to add to her fantasies.

Hmm, and you think that Clark is gonna get closer to Lois after all this is done? You could be right.

LOL. That would have been a funny way to take it.

Clark: Lois? Are you trying to turn me into Superman? I don't mind ... tooo much, just don't push me out a window or anything.

Really? You think the red cape will do it?

Hmmm, did you grovel enough ... I think ... maybe you did.

Okay. As you all asked so nicely I'll put the final part up.

She’s probably too horny to notice Superman.



I don’t think it was accidental.

Michael

Really? Well, there has been much oggling - or 'expectation of oggling' to come for Lois.

You know ... lots of readers are of the same opinion.

Again with the presumptions you make ... tut tut

Ooops? Tee hee.

Wonder why…

Michael

Getting better and better!

--definitely moving out of 'friend zone' ! Thank goodness for tight t-shirts ...did not think she'd wait till they were back in their room to attach his 'cape' (love typing 'their room', btw--so glad they are sharing!!!)....Here comes the biggest shocker of Lois' life---I think?! On to part #3!