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For those of you following along with my Story Arc groupings over on my TOC page , I've altered them slightly making THIS the beginning of the next story arc, and moving the last two parts back into the previous story arc. I've also changed the name of this short transitional Arc between "Threes" and the tentatively entitled "Wedding of the Century" plot arc to "Undercover Dates", so you might have a feel for where this story is headed, at least, in the short run. If you're more the type who ignores the part number, mostly because you don't want to be reminded of how long this epic story is, please disregard everything I've written here and just enjoy the ride.

If you're surprised by Lois and Clark bumping into one another again so soon, you'll be delighted (somewhat) with what's to come.

I'd love to hear what you think. Please feel free to bash Lois, Lex, Cat, Phil and/or Clark here. You may praise them as well, but after re-reading this part prior to posting, I doubt that will be on the forefront of anyone's mind. Oh, and Jimmy, although, I can't see why anyone would feel like bashing the poor guy at the moment. It's bad enough that he's in jail for blowing up the DP and murder, now he's being represented by Lois's old lawyer.

EDIT: Please ignore that first paragraph because I've totally reversed that decision to move those parts to the previous story arc. The name change for this current story arc remains though.

What’s he doing there?

Oh, he’s stalking her. He just not very good at staying hidden.

So, basically, they’re screwed?
LOIS: That was *inside* a hospital room.

Oooooh!

Placing explosives inside the building and setting up a detonation sequence so the structural integrity of the building would be severely compromised.

Well…to be fair, *Ralph* is smarter than Luthor gives a woman credit for.

Sounds like Harvard Business School did not prepare him for the real world.
CHIP: Hey, my time is much too expensive to be wasted on walking down stairs.

Wouldn’t it be awkward if that were actually HG Wells?

Kids these days… It’s with all that bomb-making instructions available on that bedangled net-thingy everybody is talking about these days.

Michael

Darth Michael: Thanks for reading and commenting!
Maybe he's not feeling well because he was exposed to kryptonite earlier in the day?

Stalking her? He was just walking down the hall. He had no reason to think she'd end up at the hospital.

They're screwed because CLARK has to think on his feet?
CLARK: I do much prefer to think while floating, but it's not impossible to do it the other way.
CLARK: /confused/ No. Lex was in the room, Minha, we're in the hall.
LOIS:

LOIS: Thank you, Nigel, but what I *meant* was WHAT were they doing there?
NIGEL: Oh, you'd have to ask... er... um... someone else?

RALPH: /excitedly goes and applies at LNN./

Hmmmm. I must have not made this very clear, but Chip was in the elevator when the explosion went off. He didn't enter the elevators to escape. Clark blames himself (doubly) because he never checked the elevators and he figures that Chip was on the way down to the newsroom to ask for his driver's license.


MAYSON: Callboy? Hmmmm. What exactly does that entitle, Mr. Kent? Please give me a thorough example for my records, which will be promptly lost afterwards.

/LEX hears/ Blah blah blah "Bang" blah. Blah blah Jimmy blew blah blah.
LEX: I already know about Mr. Olsen and your sister, Lois. Let's go back to your first suggestion.
LOIS:

JIMMY: Golly, gee, Ms. Lane. Thanks.

Sorry. I felt it worked better than "Smooth" his usual catch-phrase.

Thanks for your comments.

Oooh! Almost a complete roundtrip now!
Right. Clark is going to the hospital to get himself checked out. Right. Oh look. A hoof-footed dude is buying ice skates over there.

Mr ‘I can hear her from across the town’. Yeah. Right.

That’s the one.

LOIS: I’m not so sure…



He’s going to have fun on the casting couch.

Nah, I think it was pretty much implied. But interpreting it my way made for a better laugh at the dead Chip’s expense.



Actually, two doorbells and a whistle?

CLARK: I have to be. She’s slippery, that one.

Michael

that he still likes it.

At first I thought this was about them staying on the floor during the reunion, which I recall them not, then I realized he meant now.

I am glad he finally realizes she accepts him.

Which Kents?

That is the most miraculous miracle of all.

A good argument for them not eloping today.

Only of Clark's life so far.

Clark:Still, the joy and excitement in that kiss will be hard to top for a long time to come. Not until Lois agrees to marry me, and even then it will be hard to rival.

Lois:I am sure I can give you a kiss that tops that one if I put enough energy into it.

I guess knowing he can do it and seeing him actually do it are two separate things.

Finally he sees that she is not Lana. With how the reaveal worked out before, he had never fully seen it. I am sure he knew at some level she would not react like Lana, but still he had not yet seen that she would not.

we get this scene again.

I am so glad they are now able to actually speak to each other with their hard to decipher code.

Hopefully he can be a good actor when playing.

I wish her telling him this would actually guarantee that he would believe it.

He forgets Lois has spun him as the one who did the spurning. Or is it more she has neglect explain this detail to him?

I guess Lois not having heard is believable. She had not discussed the issue with Henderson, had she?

Never under estimate Lois's acting skill. It s key to her investigations. Also, one of Luthor's main mistakes.

She is really good at acting if she has not yet revealed to Luthor she knows that the DP was bombed.

Gag.

Their (Lois and Clark's) relationship won't really move forward until the investigation ends.

He has more right to be by Lois than the creep Luthor does.

More evidence of how horribly Luthor treats Lois.

Evidence of how much he lies to Lois.

Clark: Only because you had planted evidence and paid police.

Gripe at her defending Luthor.

Wait, did Luthor just admit he knows that Cat is pregnant? Is there any justifiable way for him to know that that does not involve bugging the DP?

I think that should be "overheard the rumors that".

Also, Lois just slug the creep out now. He as passed the line of acceptable behavior by accusaing Clark of having sexual relations with an engaged woman.

Just meeting her in the hall would not have helped.

Is this sort of like how he is "quite friendly" with his personal assistant, Mrs. Cox?

Just the positive effects of prolonged close contact with Superman. By close, we mean extremely close.

I wish she would just punch him.

At least she tells Luthor this.

At least he told Lois before he told Cat's fiancé.

Why did she go there?

Oh no, that is the worst thing she could have said. Even though she told Clark she would lie, he will still assume a grain of truth.

Cat:That means that Luthor was the one who sent the pictures.

Or did she already figure it out?

He knows the truth. Biology is not what makes a father.

That is pretty precise.

Rejecting a child I much harder than rejecting a woman, at least in some ways. Although it is probably good that Phil came around before he learned Cat was pregnant.

No, no, no. Even if Lana had not convinced Clark that he could never father a child (I doubt she ever allowed that theory t be tested), Wells (gripe at him), as convinced Clark he never could father a child with Lois.

Aargh, aragh, argh. Why do you say such horrible things Lois?

This is giving Lex hope that he can change Lois's mind.

Lois: Than why don't you tell me where you hide the Kryptonite?

With friends like Cat, Clark does not need enemies.

I like Clark worrying about this issue.

Why does he have an empty tape recorder?

Jimbo won't cause his rent to go up at all though.

And Luthor was trying to get rid of me to once he took over the planet. He showed no appreciation of my saving his life.

Jimmy: Yet she remains engaged to my chief accuser.

Clark: But not working the way you are thinking Jimmy.

Clark: Lois already sees the light, she just needs a way out of her investigation.

Obviously without discussing it at all with Lois on the who side. Although, maybe this time the ADA on the case will be more open to Schwartz method's of persuasion.

No more Wells to come and mess things up.