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Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Clark TOC can be found Here

I'm sorry this part is so short, but that was just a nice pleasant place to end, don't you think? Next part will be longer, I promise.

The undercover dating is now becoming more apparent. I hope you're okay with the characters explaining what happened off-page between kisses for a while. You get what you want, and I can move the story forward a bit.

Please leave your comments here.

You foisted Ellen on Lex.

That (and the kissing) made up for the fact that it was a short part! teeeheee

I love the Mrs. Cox is so jealous. That's rich!!

I enjoyed the "tell not show" part of things here as it advanced the storyline. Besides, re-telling the same thing all over wouldn't have made sense.

So much for Luthor's claims of trusting her.

Lois is getting into Luthor's office.

I'm surprised it's so easy to talk directly to Luthor's personal assistant. I would think he would have a few more layers between himself and those answering the phone.

She underestimates Perry's persistence.

I wouldn't be surprised.

The later sounds like the type of crazy thing Luthor would do.

Was it even taken with her permission, or was this the disturbing shot that we saw in Vatman?

I'm glad she realizes this.

She needs to learn more about Kryptonite. She should ask him about it.

Lois: It is more fun to kiss him.

I'm glad they avoided it being ruled a suicide.

She needs to trust her gut less. Luthor always hurts people.

Yes, she saw Superman.

Now she knows that Luthor could make his office a place where Superman could not hear her say the code word.

Sad. I was so hoping she would find the Kryptonite on this day.

Gag.

Considering that Betsy is his mistress, this is just sickening.

Do it, do it, do it.

Yes, she used the right term for Betsy.

She has outwitted Luthor. Although this may not have been wise to let him know of more of her family and friends.

They're touching.

At least he now admits she has the tougher part.

Maybe he should be more open in telling Lois he wants to meet her mother.

more touching.

Clark: Yes, she said the three words.

kissing.

That's why he shouldn't use Superspeed when dealing with her underwear.

next part will be subtitled "In which Clark learns the curse does not apply here."

Kismatt: I'm glad you enjoyed this part.
Just trying to move the story along faster through kissing.

They are both strong women and it always annoyed me in HoL how Lois seemed to cower around her. The Lois we know and love wouldn't let any woman touch her husband-to-be in the way Mrs. Cox touches Lex when he introduces them in BatP.

Thanks for commenting.


Christina: Thanks for still reading.
Well, technically, it was more a talk about not show part.

I try not to do that, except with very important scenes, where I show something completely different by showing another person's POV. Anyway, I figured you guys would much rather see Lois and Clark together than Lois and Lex.

LEX: I want to make a formal protest!

John: Hey! /Rubs hands to see what new insights John has for me./
Well, I considered adding in a part... hmmm, maybe I still will, so I better not mention it here. This was actually set-up for something else which would be set-up for something else. We'll see. Maybe I'll just by-pass the rest of the set-up and just get to the something else.

Getting there isn't difficult. Staying in there long enough to investigate is the difficult part.

Well, I'm sure Jack wouldn't be patched through. Perry, as editor of Lex's now-controlled Daily Planet, would have more access to Lex's secretary than say someone like Jack or Louie.

MRS. COX: /cough/ Excuse me. But I'm a *Personal* Assistant to Mr. Luthor.

LOIS: Oh, is that what you're calling it nowadays?

I'm sure Mrs. Cox didn't get to be Lex's personal assistant just on her good looks, either.

LEX: Well, we are a visual sex; LexLabs proved that before LexComp started that new LXPorn website.

The photo from Vatman wasn't disturbing. It was a shot of Lois walking down the street. HOW the picture must have been obtained is the only disturbing thing about it. And, yes, it's like that photo, only a different one.

LOIS: /points to trashcan where she threw her rose-colored glasses/

It's on her to-do list.

See, that's the problem. That one is in permanent marker and she never seems to get past it.

Probably due to nudges from Clark Kent.

How does Lex physically hurt Lois in canon? /The emotional hurt is obvious./

Good Point.

Even if she could open the room off of Lex's office, would she be able to open the safe in which he keeps his valuable meteorite samples?

He's thinking of his future.

No? He already knows about them.

LEX: I say. That's quiet offending. /shrugs/ Mrs. Cox, cross that young man's name off the wedding guest list.

MRS. COX: /writing/ "Send John an extra invitation."

LOIS: He is quite handsy... I mean, *handy* to have around the bedroom... I mean the house. Yes, *house*.

No, that's just Lex.

Nobody is quite like Lana. Let's just say, she's the worse of the lot.

LOIS: Respect! Duh!

Lois doesn't even know how her complaints of Lex are like twisting the knife she stuck in Clark's gut by rejecting him.

Twice the man Luthor COULD ever be. As in, if Luthor was honest, kind, sweet, generous, and not evil, Clark would still be twice as good as him.

Thanks. Fixed.

She might if she learns Clark is unable to father a child before he asks her opinion of having children of her own. Kind of a which comes first scenario: the curse or Lois's honest answer.

CLARK: You said 'nothing happened'.

We're past the part where she ate the cream-filled cannoli by this point.

-- Continuation of Response to John's FDK -- She has to lead a double life, live in an apartment with 24-hr. surveillance and act like it's not there, and try to find the goods at Luthor at the same time.

LOIS: It's not outside the bounds of hope for me to survive... I mean, to have success in my investigation.

I doubt her mother is the best person to trust with Lois's current double-life at the moment.

He'd much rather kiss Lois than touch her underwear.

No, actually, it's called "Back in Town." Thanks for your comments.

Michael

Edit:
But Lois and Lex together are much creepier!

Darth Michael: Yea! All these kissing parts haven't scared off Michael! Never mind.

MRS. COX: I can take her in a fight.

MRS. COX: That sounds pretty.
LOIS: Who would want that?
LEX: Ooops. I courted the wrong sister.

Don't most bakeries?

EX-GROOM: But she was a *gift* from my boss, darling! What was I supposed to do? Say 'no'?

Well, he has noticed that Lois is more likely to kiss him if they aren't fighting...

LOIS: Early? What do you mean "early"? She's helping me... Lex prep for the wedding.

LOIS: Who?

Thanks. I have a fondness for laundry.

One vote for more Lois and Lex scenes. Gotcha!

Yeah, it was a tad icky, but you promised some Lex/Lois action early on so I just pushed through. Are the two love birds any closer to consummating yet?

Who, me? I’m not think anything. I’m too busy watching the clock… Might be less than 34 hours now.



Yes, but the Ptolomeien dynasty still considered themselves pharaohs.

Michael

At least when the underwear is not on her.

That would require he to actually make progress in her investigation, which seems fairly rare.