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Here's the link to Part 166 .

Thank you all for reading.

Good, she is warning Lucy. Lucy deserved more mention in the show than she got.

Especially since he's the out-of-favor boyfriend.

He already has one more, at least.

he found the note.

Even if there was nothing inside the envelope itself would have helped him.

I'm glad he fully accepts this.

I would have read it out of sheer curiosity.

I think "fall in love with" would work better here.

This seems to be true for the opposite of the reason he suspects.

Those were fun, even if there were far too few of them.

I think "secret to Metropolis" is what you want to say here, unless you want to modify Metropolis with another word.

That sounds pretty extreme considering Lois was protecting the innocent and her actions probably reduced the disruption to the country by an awful lot.

That was a horrible way to start this conversation if she wanted to get any actual cooperation.

John: Thanks for reading and commenting.
I liked Lucy at the beginning of S1 and am not quite sure why they got rid of her, except to make Lois more of a loner.

But he's a known entity. And it wasn't a messy break-up. They parted as friends.

Do you mean Phil, Henderson, or Perry?

The unopened envelope HAS helped him.

This Clark has been burnt on more than one occasion and is a bit more emotionally cautious than Canon Clark.

Thanks. Fixed.



Mostly, they happened off page.

And you'd be right. Thanks.

It's like Mayson's dislike of Superman. She doesn't like it when people take the law into their own hands.

CLARK: I... er... Superman doesn't do that! He follows the letter of the law.

MAYSON: :rolleyes: Yeah. Right.

Good point. That may have been intentional... on my part, not Lois's.

Lois: I never said you were in bed with Mr. Church, that is an admission all your own.

She does have a point.

Lois: Oh yes, Lex also tried to pawn him off on Jimmy. Luckily he rejected him, since the prosecutor and judge assigned to that case are both male, so Schwartz's methods would have even less chance of succeeding than they did with you.

Bill Jr.: Maybe I will have to buy this one a ring before I get any action.

Nah, I think the failure was just to show off parts of his body to Mayson.

I am not at all surprised that Drake is weak minded enough to blame Superman.

Lois:Maybe if I had tried this earlier, things would have progressed more.

Lois:I only prance naked where only Chuck will see me.

Lois:Without even having the decency to consult with me on it, or consider that I had cearly indicated I hated that lawyer.

I love how Lois sets up a situation where Drake has to agree her ethics include sending people to jail for crimes others committed.

Yes, Mayson just agreed Jimmy is innocent.

I don't think that would be possible, but I could see Luthor trying it.

So Lois does not have to worry about it every applying.

I don't think it was even that. My guess is they decided to cut back on the core cast, or they just couldn't think of more ways to keep incorporating Lucy.

I meant Henderson, and forgot about Perry. I figure Clark does realize that Phil knows.

I was thinking they also all happened post Honeymoon suite, but on further reflection I remembered there were earlier ones. Maybe even a lot just after she got shot. Getting shot by Luthor is the main key to this Lois and Clark having grown close together faster than canon Lois and Clark. Although there are other major keys as well.

Sounds exactly like what Luthor would do.

Bugs in the apartment are nothing like telling someone if your mother is there so you can know she isn't dead.

This way she knows what to expect when she gets the one from Billy Jr.

More like wondering how Billy wants to limit her.

See, Billy is so much nicer. He doesn't try to excessively control the women he is with. He will let them leave the car any old where as we saw in "Whine, Whine, Whine".

No court in the US would ever up hold a fraudulent intent to marry case.

Whose name we will not reveal but whose initials are Mayson Drake.

The Caped Crusader?

Would Lois risk talking to Friskin?

Lois:We have a balanced, consensual, reasonable relationship. There is no obsession involved.

Lois: No love, only hate.

Probably it was someone else posing as her. Which is why phone authorizations are generally not allowed.

I think "was a soft knock" would flow better.

What? You killed off Ellen. This is horrible.

The real reason she should never have gotten engaged to Luthor. It destroyed her having any chance of a personal life.

Lois:I would never do that to him, and he would never do that with anyone else.

Which means it is Luthor's fault, because he is the one who sent her on a wild goose chase instead of telling her the truth.

I think "better than a scandal lined to a high profile society" would flow better.

To bad she didn't give the "in You Face" guy an equally strong stare in SL&V.

No, only Mrs. Goode needs the policy.


Samantha: I had better get a ring from Mr. Goode before things get bad for him. I hope he does no mind that I faked the picture of Mrs. Lane at the clinic.

Only someone as truly condescending and prideful as Luthor would see being unable to cook as "cultured".

Gag at Lois smiling at Luthor. This is so sickening.

After reading through this sentence several times, I realized it would sound a lot better as "It was his pleasure ...", I don't think the to works there.

I think "or not claim to" would sound better here.

I'm so glad he is wrong on this point.

What is she discovers he's all 3. On the other hand, does it count if she knows of the mistress before the wedding?

Total lies like everything Luthor says.

It took two readings to realize he was toying with the idea of burying her alive.

Hah, he is so long.

Yes, happy dance.

Hah, if he only knew.

Sounds like Luthor needs to go to his house for the mentally unstable if he believes this rubbish.

I'm surprised they had Reed and not one of the arresting, incompetent flunkies do this part.

Clark: You say it like you never are wrong Lois.

Lois:Name one time I was wrong.

Clark:Well, I can't think of any off the top of my head.

Lois:Exactly.

For all Reed knew this was the tie of one of the other men who regularly sleeps at her apartment.

Lois: What?

Reed:I wouldn't want to expose you any more than I already have.

Why would writing such a great novel make her a laughing stock?

Better keep the real Charles as far away from Mayson as possible.

Not to be confused with the much more amorous Wanda and Chuck. Of course Chuck (the last part was blocked by the spoiler police).

She gets to touch her boyfriend, unlike Lola.

I think this would flow better was an between that an awful.

I think you need a between of and helicopter.

Lola survived without Tempus. This sounds like an actually good ending to "Another Lois".

He would definitely try.

John: THE FDK - PART II.
CLARK: Well, most everybody doesn't know it.

ROBERTSON: I never said that the claims would be well-founded.

LEX: I've never said that I know where Ellen Lane is.

Is there a Mrs. Goode?

I doubt there was ever a romantic relationship between them, but then again, it's been a while since I watched that episode.

-- Continuation of Response to John's FDK -- LEX: Well, only pedestrian people learn to cook. The rest of us hire people to do it for us.

Again, this is Lex's POV. What Lois's intentions may not be what Lex believed them to be.

Thanks. Fixed.

Thanks Fixed.

LOIS: You know, I'm okay with his separating me from my family, it just the permanence of his choice I'm not comfortable with.

I don't think so.

LEX: What? I don't take betrayal well.

LEX: I'm taking this from the reaction, or lack-thereof, of Superman's disappearance during Nightfall.
LOIS: Definite articles, they are trying to ruin me! Thanks, John.

ARGH! Again! /humbly crawl off to add definite articles before every noun whether needed or not./

Actually, "Tempest" is a stand in name for Lex. And, thank you, even if it isn't the happily ever after Lola deserves.

Try to fix Lola and Charles's problem so that they could be together?

CLARK: You know, I've been told that's impossible, so I guess you're stuck with me. /as guilt sets in, he pushes it to the side and tries to ignore it./

Yes, you're probably right, but they could have kept her on a recurring character like Eduardo.

Yes, Clark knows about Phil.

Actually it started after she was shot. She discovered that Clark wasn't sleeping well (mostly because he was staking out her apartment, making sure she stayed safe), so she insisted that they talk at bedtime every night. It progressed from there.

Well… Did she peek?

Isn’t she adorable?

Well…those are part of her job.

The woman does sound like she’s suffering from a spot of paranoid delusions.

For what?

:rotlfol:

Awww…her ‘friend’ wanted to bed Superman.
LOIS: Good thing she went to see a doctor to get cured of those notions.

Ooooh! Of course, duh! A blonde. Batman so got a thing for blondes.
CLARK: And I did not date one blonde after the next one?
LOIS: Speak on…

She loves to hate him? She hates that he loves her? In his own way.

Wait, did Lex just have a bunch of numbers set up and outsourced it to a call center in Bangalore?

Oh. Right. On the second read this makes so much more sense. The first two calls were from the Dirt Digger. My bad.

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So, Lois repeatedly plunging a steak knife into Lex’s belly and loins would be defined as ‘willing’?

Michael

Thanks for the FDK, Michael. I'll respond tomorrow, when I post the next part. I can't compete against Anti-K and ShayneT for readers. (Plus, technically, my cushion is hovering at 4.75 parts at the moment. Part 172 should be finished tomorrow, allowing me to post. )

Darth Michael: Can I
CLARK: Say what?
LOIS: Nothing.

LEX: I tell you, I've been tested recently for crabs. Oh, those weren't the bugs to which you were referring? Never mind then. I was lying.

LEX: Isn't she adorable?

Fraudulently telling a man she'd marry him, if he made all the wedding preparations and paid for everything, all the time knowing that she would never marry him.
BENDER: Sounds like fraud to me, but please. I really need to brush up on my Chinese.

It wasn't Ralph's Pagoda, or wherever we see Bobby Bigmouth working in The Phoenix.

Sounds like Americanize Chinese food. Yep.

LEX: Superman wants to bang her and that's the only way I can get there first.

LEX: Um... the sex?

No, wipe. Sorry. But either works here.

LEX: No. That's not allowed.

I do think that they use that format elsewhere too.

LEX: /phew/ I sterilize all the women I'm ever with, so that's never a problem.

One doesn't double-cross The Boss.

That's the place.

LEX: Unless you don't mean what I think you mean by "steak knife", I'm going to have to say 'no' that's not allowed.

Apparently the Chinese equivalent is as confusing to understand.

Good one!

MAYSON: It's evidence. I'm taking it home to examine it more closely.

CLARK: I'm abusive?
LOIS: :rolleyes:

Thanks. Fixed.

LOIS: /Scoffs/ Well, I... Can you believe...? It was only... I'm not inviting you to the party when it becomes a best seller!

That's the one.

CLARK: /gulp/ Um... Lois... /tugs at his collar/ You want me to write an Nfic with you? /swallows uncomfortably/
LOIS: Well, Charles can't touch her physically, so she'll have to do all the...
CLARK: /soto/ Sounds familiar.
LOIS: What?
CLARK: Nothing. Lovely. Just let me read what you've written so far and I'll get back to you.
FIVE MINUTES LATER:
LOIS: /glances up/ Was that an explosion? It sounded as if came from Clinton. I hope Clark's okay.

Hmm…must be Sunday
LnC: Neener neener neener! That’s karma for you and your Jimmys and Herbs and Lexes.
ER: Umm… you guys do know that you’ll never get to 2nd base if the EW keeps getting interrupted. And considering her buffer, Lois must currently be happily snuck away in Lex’s honeymoon suite in the Swiss Alps while EW is taking a break.
LnC:

I was suggesting he L. I. E. about what he’s doing out there. It’s not like someone would check up on him.





Right. This is Clark. There’s a reason why he’s wearing zip-up boots instead of ones with laces.

So, point of great concern to her, huh?

MINDY: He’s classy!

Yeah, I know. There’s Cat. There’s Catwoman. And then there’s the brunette living with two-dozen cats instead of a husband.

I’m just saying he would ever so often accidentally sneak a peek. Otherwise, how could he make sure she’s home alone, safe.
SUPERMAN: Plus, she had a drowned spider drawn on her window. That meant I had to look.

Well…it’s about time someone pulled Lois from her high horse.



Afraid that Lois would send him a ticket to The Nutcracker?

Michael