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#138201 03/22/05 03:05 PM
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Okay, I wrote this for my beginning poetry class... As a poet, I make a better novelist wink

Naked Toes

My father always said
That you might as well be naked
If you're not wearing shoes

Oh how I glory,
In naked toes!

The prickly crunch of fresh-cut grass
Beneath my feet.
The gritty squishy-squash
Of slippery mud between my toes.

Oh how I glory,
In naked toes!

Splashing in a puddle,
Isn't half as fun,
Wearing shoes.
As it is, with
Naked toes!

Oh how I glory,
In naked toes!

The sharp rocks beneath them,
Poking the thick, callused soles.
Walking down the hot sidewalk,
Watching for broken glass.

Oh how I glory,
In naked toes!

The hippety-hop step
In the summer
When walking on melting asphalt.
Only to be cooled by the clear water
Of the creek.

Oh how I glory,
In naked toes!


β€œRules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore

"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
#138202 03/22/05 06:43 PM
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Nice, Laura!

I've added your poem to the Original Poems TOC . smile

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