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Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Tuesday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep. And yes that is the right day, blush

TOC | Part 22

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Lois looped an arm through his. “Lucy’s out again tonight... Jimmy’s taking her out to some movie...”

Clark grinned at her. “Is that a hint?”
Also, in case anyone's interested, some soundbites of Dr. John Kormendy ~.^


0:50-1:00, 7:30-7:40


1:44-1:55, 4:10-4:18

Edit: And CJ's boss is a hat's off to Carol's Van, ~.^


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OMG, you've Doc Klein in here clap

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Just to let you know I am still reading, but not good at writing feedback...

Jimmy knowing will get some getting used to for me (I think it was too fast for me).

I loved the scene at the bachelor auction and that Rachel would bet for her own husband. Hopefully nobody recognised her, this could really complicate things, as she is pregnant.

CJ and Rachel wealthy is also a nice touch. He really is not the chronic do gooder as Clark is, or am I horribly mistaken?

Looking really forward to the development of the relationship between Lois and Clark!

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This story is so sweet and lovely. I get a warm and cozy feeling wheneve I read it. Looking forward to the rest


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I always love it when I see something that I didn't anticipate but just feels so right. Lex having CJ investigate Superman is wonderfully perverse. razz (Reminds my of why I feel the way I do about Lex.)

An of course, I LOVE this part.
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Clark smiled at her and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. “I love you, Lois Lane.”

Lois’ eyes filled with wonder. “Clark...”

Clark kissed her softly. “I just need you to know that, Lois... That you’re important to me... If you aren’t there yet, that’s ok... Remember, I...”

Lois placed a finger to his lips. “I love you, too, Clark...”
This is how it's supposed to be. [Linked Image] love

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Awwwwwww! Great part!

Loved the introduction of Dr. Klein, the bachelor auction, the Lois and Cat interaction etc.

I too was blown away when Rachel made the winning bid. Never thought they would have that kind of money but Clark was right with his "government" explanation. wink

Wonderful ending! Can't wait for the next part!

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Michael: peep *waves* Hi! Glad you still like it? *goes back to hiding*

Fuzzy: Yeah, Jimmy and Lucy were an impulse that surprised me too when I wrote it. And your reading of CJ is correct. Glad you're still reading, =)

robinson: I'm glad you're still liking it, =)

Bob: I'm glad Lex is living up to your image of him, hehe. As for the donation... we'll see... And I'm glad you liked the declaration, =)

Natascha: I think Dr. Klein is more of a camio at this point, ~.^ But I'm glad you liked it, =)


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Hiding is a good thing, Sara.
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After what you did...
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Or not did
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Or well, you can count yourself amongst the evil writers now
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Tease... /huffs/
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Still reading and enjoying the telepathic foursome. I really enjoyed the bits between Dr. Klein and CJ - I hope we get to see more of the Doc in future parts.

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Lois suddenly grinned. “And who better to throw Luthor off and control what he learns?”
It's also nice to see that Lois is still thinking on her feet. laugh

Not so sure it was wise for CJ Kent's (aka Charlie King's) wife to bid $50K on Superman. I figure Rachel didn't want to see her husband out on a date with just anyone, but she just made the Kent clan a whole lot more visible and interesting to Luthor with that stunt.

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Michael: peep =P

BJ: I'm glad you're still liking it and we'll see on Luthor's interests =X

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