anotherfolc mentioned
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the clone aaarrrgghhh
(italics mine) and I could not agree more. If my wife-to-be had said those things to me, I would have shoved Lex under the wheels of the car he was driving and put it in gear while I forcibly carried her away with me. It was just about the worst plot point of the show (except maybe for the "Bummer-be-gone").

Interesting that the clone is still alive. I wonder how large a role she'll play in the next few chapters? And I also wonder about the half-million for bail. Is it because the judge knew that Luthor didn't have much more than a half-dollar on him at the time? Or is this a way to get good ol' Lex out of jail and back in the middle of our favorite lovers' lives?

I agree that this is already better than the Dr. Doofus episode arc. Keep it up!


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