DJ - I read this part a few days ago, but I was at work, where I don't log on, and haven't had a chance to get online at home to leave you feedback.
I really liked this chapter. As Elisabeth said, Lois and Clark stayed true to character. I was glad Clark told her his secret, but I was also sort of glad that Lois was so angry at him for it. And particularly the way he did it - I could completely understand why she was angry at him for not letting her down. She wanted to rant and rave probably (and possibly get away) but all she can do is stand still up there.
I can't wait to see how you resolve this!
