Hey CC -
Wonderful! Both this story and that you are continuing with TTW. I wondered after the end of that one how our AltClark and AltLois would fare, and I guess now I'm going to get to find out.
I think you've done a great job in giving the various Lios's and Clark's different voices. It is helping to keep everyone straight that AltLois is a little harder and more cynical than RealLois and that AltClark is a little more passive.
I will support Wendy's advice. Post one day, skip a day, then maybe post the next day. Gives us all time to read and to post a comment. These sections are good lengths - long enough to get me into the story (sometimes short posts just don't pull me in quite as completely) but not too long that I can't absorb it in one sitting.
Great job. Looking forward to the next installment.
Lynn
