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Well, what do you think?

(I'm well aware of Lois's later dietary preferences, but we were all young and immortal once.)

The Fudge Castle? The Double-Fudge Crunch Bars? The pastrami sandwiches? The chocolate ice cream? The stale cheese from a vending machine sandwiches? Pizza? Cream soda? It's good she learned to eat healthier, huh?

My there's a lot of tension at this football game. I always knew I was naive, even in high school (my friends used to tell me so, so it's fact), but I've never felt so uncomfortable as Lois does as this game. And I don't mean the bleacher seats.

Boy, the Churches are a fun family. If Junior is the smart one, I'm going with Tom being as smart as a tree stump. No wonder he's cheating. (My guess is that Junior only made it into Harvard because of Daddy's help.)

With friends like these... Did they know that the football team was out to get her?

Could it be because he didn't get food like this very often?

Um... because the Churches know your name, something IS wrong.

It's terrific. I read a lot of other universes fic, and, Clark, I'm sorry, there isn't one.

Hmmmm. They should have left BEFORE the game ended.

/Psst./ You're missing an opening quote mark before "Being".

How did they win again?

And, Joe, in case you skipped English class, those are the three tenses. Can you name them? How is Lois going to save him? She's got to save him. I know he can escape unscathed, but not without revealing himself.

Come back and post the next part already!

“From what I’ve seen, the only time you aren’t taking chances is when you’re thinking up new chances to take.” LOL!

I am loving this story and can't wait for more. I have been faithfully reading, unfortunately not a lot of time for commenting other than I love it.

Loving the story. Look forward to reading Homecoming 7++.

Only part of a sushi lunch? I can understand the football food. Clark was probably listening to her stomach rumble through most of the game.

Bill Church and Bill Junior are perfect. (I kept hearing Peter Boyle's voice--then I looked it up and realized that Peter Boyle actually played Bill Church.)

Dying to know what happens when Lois finds out what Clark has heard about CostMart. Maybe that article of hers needs a little broader scope. "How I brought down a billionaire starting in a boy's locker room."

( Mindy??!?!!?!? Please?)

Waiting to see how they take care of the team.

Random notes:
"one of the girl's" should be "one of the girls"
"its'" should be "its"

ack that is an evil cliffhanger to leave it on!! I would like a little background on *Why* the Church family/footballers are so hostile to Lois if she was conducting a secret investigation. How do they know? Why are they suspicious of her?

First off wonderful tale. I do hope you make it last long enough for L&C to both intern at the Planet and take down Intergang.

Since in canon we saw Intergang moving into the vacuum created by the fall of Luthor it might be useful to see Luthor's people quietly dropping crumbs that help L&C in their campaign against Intergang.

You could end with L&C being unsettled about some of the serendipitous leaks that helped them bring down the local branch of Intergang.

Regardless of that, it is a delightful tale.

From the sounds of things Clark is still on the streets, likely with just a mailing address in the school district and with a well hidden camp elsewhere.

It would be nice if the district contained or bordered on something like
Portland\'s Forest Park . Something like that would be a great place for Clark to hide.

I am wondering if your Clark can fly yet? If not this tale should provide a great place for that power to kick in, surprising both L&C! It would also make a fun revelation.

You could even use the classic line from 1978's "Superman"

Lois: "You've got me!, Who's got you?"

I am so looking forward to more.

Mindy would be a couple of years younger then Lois. She was played by Jessica Collins who was born April 01, 1971.

Teri Hatcher was born December 8, 1964 but I think the Lois Lane in the series was supposed to be born around 1967, and Clark around 1966.

I went back and looked over the first couple of chapters and I don't think we are given ages in "Homecoming". So figure Clark for 17 or 18 and Lois for 16 or 17, Mindy [not yet Church] would be 12 to 13.

I hope she does leave, if she leaves Clark can cover his use of powers by the confusion of all of these guys getting in each others way.

Each will think their minor injury, which will stop him from playing, was done by another player trying to bash Clark.

This means the players will engage in a coverup of the attack rather that focusing official attention on Clark.

Clark can't afford attention.

I can see L&C talking later

Lois: "How did you get away?"

Clark: "The first thing you learn in Aikido is to evade. They kept getting in each other's way and the alcohol clearly impacted their ability to function as a team."

Aikido would be a wonderful thing for Clark to learn in any case. The mindset, the underlying philosophy of Aikido would be very useful to a superpowered being.

Uh, oh! While of course Clark will come out of this physically ok, I do worry about the aftermath. One, he certainly wouldn't want to hurt any of THEM (boy, did they have no idea what they were facing!) but also he'll be scared to death of any attention that may lead back to Kansas. Or any even bigger revelations.

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Uh-oh! Trouble for Lois and Clark. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.

Lois doesn't have to worry about herself - Clark will take care of her. Of course, she now has to worry about Clark being hurt. And Clark has to worry about Lois and about not hurting the other guys while still protecting Lois. Nice setup to a lot of drama here!