Since I've failed to comment on any of the other parts, I'm going to make this a generak feedback comment (and not just part 7, I mean).
Robin really is pretty smart for his age. When I was seven I don't think I even knew what a private school
was!
It's really sweet that Lois loves Robin right from the beginning. I wonder what she would have done if Jesse (from the actual episode) turned out to be his son.
She keeps crying all the time - looks like someone is getting in touch with her emotions.
I expect to read more soon! It's not very often that I follow a story on the message boards (last one was Addicted).
Julie