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Hi,

Great piece. help

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“They wanted to draw as many forces away from the colony as they could,” Ching continued. “The communications system. They must have hit General Command, to keep them from radioing for help.”

“Or from warning Captain Brul Ro’s pilots.”

“Then the main colony…” Clark began.

“Is likely under attack at this very moment,” Talan said grimly.
Not good! eek

Love your description of the war. thumbsup

More ASAP, please.

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WELL.....I just hope Clark gets to go home soon.

It made me sad to think of pregnant Lois flying around and around, lonely, missing Clark.

Whatever happened to the man that hit the motorcyclist??? Did he take off??

Looking forward to more ASAP


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eek Ooh...good cliffhanger. Good to see that Clark is finally getting into the action. I can just see him protecting those people but still feeling horrible about having to shoot the rebels...

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I'm with you Chris, I felt really bad for Lois in this part, trying to make it w/o Clark. Being pregnant and alone must be so tough and to have no idea when he's coming back is just heartbreaking! frown

Great part Rac, keep it coming!

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It was a trap!! smile1


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Another excellent part! whinging She misses Clark desperately. Hopefully this story will help.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Thanks for your comments everyone. I'm glad that the cliffhanger went over well (in that I got no death threats wink ). More coming up soon!

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