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Heh, heh, good place for a section break  So now... she knows. But, what's she gonna do??? PJ
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No no no no, don’t stop there 
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Hi, Great part. 
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Caryn A great part! Tricia 
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 You're good at this cliff-hanger. Perhaps too good! I want more!  Jen
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Ooooooooooooooooh gawd. I was right. This is gonna be good.
<squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel> Yes, I actually did.
I cannot wait for more. I simply cannot......I guess I must......I'll just let my imagination rome to where this may go.
The questions - it reminds me of my pre-grade 12 days (grad 1995). The whole slam/slum book idea. I totally love it!!!
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Weee!!! 
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YIKES!! Shut her, up shut her up, she's gonna blab to the whole newsroom!!! Four billion reporters standing around and Lois is gonna spill it. Good time for Clark to zip across the isle and shut her up with a long intense kiss. TEEEEEJ
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Great revelation! Loved it and Lois's reactions to Clarks e mail. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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A bit short, but it was a great place to stop, so I'll forgive you.  Again, another good installment - and this is one revelation I don't think I've seen before, and being original on that part these days is pretty hard. Good job. Eagerly waiting for the next part... Pelican (who's wondering if she should fill out some questionaires to make time pass till next part)
Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.
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I am really enjoying this story ! Great Job !
I wonder if you are planning to have a plot complication where Superman has cause to regret that he revealed his real identity in an email though .. Will Lex Luthor someday access this archived evidence ?? <g>
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Hey Caryn, this is fantastic!!!  I just read your two earlier stories and the two of parts of this one. I'm totally hooked and REALLY  can't wait for the next part. I wonder what Lois's gonna do with her newly acquired knowledge about a certain boy scout? I sure hope she is not gonna spill it in front of the whole newsroom. The idea Clark should shut her up with a passionate kiss definitely sounds good to me!! Post again soon, please!! Julia 
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Again, thanks everyone for the wonderful reponses. I know I'm torturing all of you, but frankly it's quite fun!! Some of you are giving me ideas that I never thought of, that I might just have to run with in the next one. I wonder if you are planning to have a plot complication where Superman has cause to regret that he revealed his real identity in an email though .. Will Lex Luthor someday access this archived evidence ?? <g> Hmmmm..... Since you all asked (or demanded, what's the difference <g>) for the next part, I'll post it for you. Caryn
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