Sorry it took so long to respond, but I have been working on my graduation and have hardly taken time to do anything else. But all these fantastic comments have certainly made my week! It was one of the things that kept me going last week. You guys are all
wonderful! I'm glad they weren't afraid to bring up all the harsh things they'd said and get apologies for them, too!
I'm glad you like that, Wendy. For me, the story wouldn't be ended without that. Otherwise it would still hang between them. They would address it at some point, so better now so it's a real ending. This is how I had pictured it from the start, only a few parts earlier. But I don't seem to be able to keep things short these days if I want them to be short.
Maybe an nFIC ending to this sometime?
I'm sorry, Chris, that's something you'll have to wait for a very long time then. I don't write Nfic, at least, not at this point in my life. Who knows what'll happen in the future.
And then there were my two favorite Spanish people:
Hope you're working on your next story already
Next?
/me picks herself of the floor... You mean you still want more after this?
Thanks! I'll see what I can do about your wishes, but don't expext anything some time soon.
Thanks for the wonderful comments, Laura, Wendy, Chris, Tricia, Jose, Cris and Maria!
Saskia