Yup, I definitely like this story. Great piece of work!
As to the scene where Clark spins into the suit in the bathroom. It had me confused, too, and I was immediately imagining how he'd open the door to Lois in the Suit, hugging and consoling her, just to notice sometime later that he was wearing the Suit. *giggles*
But that's just my weird mind going into overdrive. I hope that we'll hear more from you soon, story-wise.
~Sira -