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FDK: Ace is the Place #128084 10/20/03 07:28 AM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN Wanda Detroit OP Beat Reporter
OP Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN	I thought I'd get the ball rolling with my own Undercover Workplace Challenge response. I hope you enjoy it! Feedback is welcome! -Wanda "I love hardware" Detroit "He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128085 10/20/03 08:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	This is great, Wanda! Very well written, cute, and very funny! Hope to see more from you soon! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128086 10/20/03 08:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128087 10/20/03 08:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Wanda, well done and funny merry

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128088 10/20/03 08:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Totally clever! Seriously! Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128089 10/20/03 09:15 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120 shells Hack from Nowheresville
shells Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 120	Very cute Wanda! keep writing! You must be the change you wish to see in the world. - Mahatma Gandhi

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128090 10/20/03 09:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Cute, as they said! So lovely! Keep writing! AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128091 10/20/03 12:05 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Totally awesome dudette<g> Very cute Wanda. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128092 10/20/03 02:33 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Loved it! ~•~

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128093 10/21/03 12:01 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Wanda This is great. Thanks for sharing this fun story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128094 10/21/03 05:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana KathyB Merriwether
KathyB Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana	LOL!! Oh, too funny! I loved Allison. She might not be like you, but she was adorable! And a ton of cute lines in here ... from everyone being given nicknames, to the way Allison was encouraging "Lo" to go after "Chuck", to Lois's hair being in pigtails, LOL. This was my favorite line, though: Quote Allison felt satisfied that she’d let poor inexperienced Lo into the Inner Circle of Cashier’s Trust. That was just inspired. <G> Quote “How come we only get to kiss like that when we’re undercover?” he asked bashfully. Lois flushed. “I don’t know, Clark... but I almost forgot something. I am totally supposed to ask you out. ‘Cause we’d seriously be the cutest couple. Wink-wink, nudge-nudge.” And LOL again ... perfect ending! So funny. Great challenge response, Wanda! Er, I mean ... Al. Kathy

Re: FDK: Ace is the Place #128095 10/21/03 11:42 AM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN Wanda Detroit OP Beat Reporter
OP Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN	Thanks for the awesome feedback! I appreciate it and am glad I made you laugh!! Thought I'd shed some light on the "true lies" behind "Ace is the Place!" The Allison (Al) character is really a conglomeration of all of the girls I work with. I think she's an accurate presentation of how we all are together. We are definitely gossips, and we know the dirt on customers. We like to dish. We are trusting and very friendly with the "newbies." (Hence Lo being let into the Inner Circle of Cashier's Trust on the second day!) The customers I mentioned are all based on real customers. I changed the name for all of them, except there really is someone we call the "Mad Bomber," which is what gave me the idea! Well, thanks again for leaving feedback... You guys are so totally awesome. Seriously. Hugs from... Wanda "Home Depot is so not cool" Detroit PS: Yes, on slow days, someone can usually be seen giving someone else a new hairdo, or perhaps a makeover. PSS: I'm VERY excited to see everyone else's UNDERCOVER WORKPLACE CHALENGE responses... bring 'em on!!! "He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.

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