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FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128497 12/12/03 12:36 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost ethnica OP Top Banana
OP ethnica Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,342 Likes: 1 Lost	Well, I pushed the button as submitted it. My ego can take it (I hope).

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128498 12/13/03 12:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Nice post!! I hope this doesn't get in coma again Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128499 12/13/03 03:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	E, interesting development here. I do need a clarification though. When reading through this I got the impression that Clark came back and had listened in on Lois' tirade with Lex near the end there, yet his actions as Lex left with Lois slung over his shoulder seeemed to indicate that he didn't. I can't see him letting Lois go with Lex without some sort of confrontation if he'd heard Lois' declaration of disgust for Luthor and his practices. Also he didn't seem shocked or surprized to see Lois being carted off like a sack of grain. I think a little bit of tweaking to clarify those actions would be nice. Or, I'm goofy and totally misinterpeted your post. Tank (who wonders if Lois will wake up in a Las Vegas hotel room next to...)

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128500 12/13/03 08:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great piece. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128501 12/13/03 08:35 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada Julie S Top Banana
Julie S Top Banana Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,168 Toronto, Ontario, Canada	Like I said before, Clark = useless. I really like this part. And please, someone volunteer to do the 9th part asap, I don't want to wait too long again! (For those who are thinking, "If she wants a new part why doesn't she volunteer?" Well, at the pace my own story is going, a round robin has no hope of being written by me anytiome soon. Sorry.) Julie Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be? Scully: I only get five? Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully? (The X-Files)

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128502 12/13/03 08:26 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Ethnica A great part! Some very intriguing developments here. Like Tank, I'm also confused. I got the impression that Clark overheard everything that Lois said to Lex. If that's correct, why does he let Lex walk out carrying Lois? Surely he realizes that Lois would never make that choice in these circumstances. Hopefully someone will continue this. I want to know what happens next. Tricia

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128503 12/15/03 11:22 AM
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Anonymous Unregistered A	This story is very interesting, please continue it as soon as possible. Mel

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128504 12/15/03 11:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,206 Pacific Northwest RL Top Banana
RL Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,206 Pacific Northwest	I had similar concerns as Tank and Tricia did. I'm assuming Clark heard everything Lois and Lex said in their argument, yet Clark did nothing when Lex carried her out. I don't think Clark would ever let Lex get away with kidnapping Lois, defending her with his last breath. -- Roger "The Constitution only gives people the right to pursue happiness. You have to catch it yourself." -- Benjamin Franklin

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128505 12/17/03 02:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	I agree with Tank I also hope someone continues this quickly and doesn't let it go in a coma again merry

Re: FDK - Part 8 House of Cards #128506 04/02/04 01:56 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Bring it back.... I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

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