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You are so Love it! You're a very, very bad woman. <g> But funny. I especially loved the 'we don't get into trouble because we're a very calm couple' line. Actually that was kind of poignant - it seemed to sum up just how awful Clark's life was with Mayson, even though he didn't realise it. <g> LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Yeah, a funny peace. Only, I can't really like or even understand Mayson - that a woman pursues a man is OK, but not if that obviously doesn't love her: I do. I do, Mayson. It´s just that...”
“What is it? Is it Lois?”
I nodded, relieved that she didn´t hear it from my mouth.
“Clark, I´m sure Lois is a wonderful person, but she is so… so infatuated with Superman that I bet she´s never realized the great man she has near her all this time.” But of course Clark should have said so!
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On the surface this may seem like an evil vignette, but we gentle readers can see through all that.
What we really have here is just another example of Clark's lunkheadedness and Lois' denials taken to the extreme.
We all know what is eventually going to happen. Mayson will get fed up with Clark's Superman activities and file for divorce. Probably about that time Lois will run screaming from the house when Dan brings in the seven hundreth stupid present. They will divorce also.
Of course we all know what will happen then...
Right, Clark goes back to Lana, and Lois rekindles her love affair with Claude.
Or something like that.
Tank (who did have enough sleep... really!)
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Beautiful, beautiful... And almost exactly what I had in mind... Great job:) I'll admit, though, that you are very, very ....
-You've got serious thrill issues, duuude!
-- Crush (Finding Nemo)
-After all, to the well-organised mind, death is but the next great adventure.
--Albus Dumbledore (Harry Potter and the philosopher's stone)
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Top Banana
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MDL Don't ever do that again. That was
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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MDL!!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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MDL Very evil! Tricia
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hey... I kinda like this stories. I guess I make it my style... MDL = or ?
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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Top Banana
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I liked it. I'm one of the small cadre - probably very small - who never understood why Clark kept wanting Lois when she obviously didn't want him. I think Clark has a right to be with someone who doesn't make him jump through hoops just for a smile or a kind word. Nothing's wrong with wanting the one who wants you, y'know. Lois slams the door, Clark moves on. C'est la vie.
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