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#14762 08/18/04 08:10 AM
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Great Part! hyper

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Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
#14763 08/18/04 08:33 AM
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Hi,

Great part. smile1


Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
#14764 08/18/04 09:02 AM
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This is cracking me up...

DonĀ“t stop writing, please!

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#14765 08/18/04 09:16 AM
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hmm we have to see what Perry published!! smile

Jose smile1


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#14766 08/18/04 09:54 AM
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What Lois has done is a terrible thing. I think in Clark's place I would have a very hard time forgiving her, soul-mate or not, at this point. It seems in this day and age, a journalist that wants to make a name for him/herself sees nothing wrong with ruining someone's life in the process. Clark isn't stupid, and he knows what goes into a decision such as she made. Part of it is a lack of concern for the person whose life she is ruining. I see a lot wrong with what she did, and if I were in Clark's position, if the revelation led to trouble for or harm to my parents, I would know exactly where to place the blame, be she ever so sorry, afterwards.

I hope you won't take my criticism as an attack on your writing, because it isn't, but in the interests of characterization, I can't really see Clark being so understanding of what she has done at this point. His life has just been destroyed, and his parents put in terrible danger by an irresponsible journalist. Being "sorry" is commendable, but it falls far short of making up for the damage she has done. He shouldn't just let her off the hook.

Nan


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#14767 08/23/04 11:52 AM
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Hi,

Where are you tipiwoman? help


Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF

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