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FDK: Harry Potter meets Lois & Clark Part I (1/?) #15783 09/17/04 02:49 AM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 160 The woods, Ontario, Canada tipiwoman OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP tipiwoman Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 160 The woods, Ontario, Canada	I think your idea has merit. However, in order to read your story, I have to have some periods inserted. I guess you probably have problems with the keyboard, but if you could read it over aloud and fix all the runon sentences, I think I could make some sense out of your story. I was only able to read the first couple of paragraphs before I gave up on deciphering. It was nice that Albus came to L&C. I wondered at first if they were going to go to Hogwarts. I'm interested in reading this story after you're done with the grammar check and punctuation. Nancy It's always such an embarrassment. Having to do away with someone. It's like announcing to the world that you lack the savvy and the finesse to deal with the problem more creatively. I mean, there have been times, naturally, when I've had to have people eliminated, but it's always saddened me. I've always felt like I've let myself down somehow.

Re: FDK: Harry Potter meets Lois & Clark Part I (1/?) #15784 09/18/04 05:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2 Kentucky Juanita Blogger
Juanita Blogger Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2 Kentucky	RodStewFan, I had no such trouble. I thought your story was GREAT! Can't wait to read more. Juanita

Re: FDK: Harry Potter meets Lois & Clark Part I (1/?) #15785 09/19/04 08:12 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN E EmilyH Columnist
EmilyH Columnist E Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN	This isn't bad, but I agree that it could be beta'd. I like the idea. I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2

Re: FDK: Harry Potter meets Lois & Clark Part I (1/?) #15786 05/18/06 04:49 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 3 cloud9 Blogger
cloud9 Blogger Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 3	Hi I think this idea is great.Please, please write some more.I am a huge HP fan and a huge LC fan.I can't wait for Harry to meet Lois and Clark. Bye

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