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Hi,

Great part. hyper


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Oh jeez here comes Lex! Lois better realize all is not quite kosher with him!!

Poor Clark, he just can't say no to her! smile

More soon! thumbsup

~Liz


Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Nice job, this Lois has a heart! Poor Clark, but I am sure it will all work out in the end. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Is Clark going to find that Lois has a date with Lex? wink

Jose hyper


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Some nice Lois action here.

It will be interesting to see if Lois can be fooled by Lex when she doesn't have the history of having existed in his 'benevolent' world for the last several years. She'd be less likely to 'fall' for his routine (I hope).

Clark is a mess. Like Lois says, the man's afraid of his shadow. It should be fun to see how panicky Lois will make him feel.

Tank (who thinks that Lois will ferret out Clarks' secret then write her story and win her Pulitzer, and live happily ever after... or not)

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Ah, this Lois is much less blinded than our beloved 'original'. She might go on a date with Luthor, but she asks herself the right questions.

My heart nearly stopped when she realized how much the not named Superman and Clark resembled each other. That she didn't get the full truth, just shows that the disguise works: you see what you want to see, and nobody would ever suspect mild-mannered Clark Kent...

I loved this part and can't wait for the next one!

Nit-picky stuff:

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Lois's draw dropped
I believe we agree that it should be her jaw?

Sira - (im)patiently waiting.

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Erin

Another excellent part! smile1

Tricia cool


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