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FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16830 10/27/04 03:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan OP Top Banana
OP Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW............ I'm a gooey mess.. Nice job Laura! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16831 10/27/04 03:40 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Really cool, Laura.. I believe now when you say you have a talent for WAFFYs... Keep up! "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16832 10/27/04 06:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Beautiful! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16833 10/27/04 09:48 PM
Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 1,302 Canada ccmalo Top Banana
ccmalo Top Banana Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 1,302 Canada	Beautiful, Laura. You've really captured the emotional tension between the two. And you're probably right about Gilbert.<g> cc m

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16834 10/27/04 11:09 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	Awwww! That was so sweet! I like your version of what Clark says much better than the original! And, of course, the kiss... Go, Clark! Very nice story! Thanks, Laura. - Vicki "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16835 10/28/04 12:47 AM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	I didn't like the episode "Barbarians at the Planet'. It was too sad. Your version "Barbarians in the Rain' is much better, is more romantic, it has happy end and oh... how sweet! I loved it! Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16836 10/28/04 09:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Cute story. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16837 10/28/04 11:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville
mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan	This was a lovely reading. Nice work, Laura!

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16838 10/28/04 04:57 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana TicAndToc Beat Reporter
TicAndToc Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 446 Indiana	Quote I always tell anyone who watches the movie with me that if Gilbert had just wrapped his coat around Anne and kissed her senseless, she would have realized her true feelings for him. I think you're right! If Clark had just kissed her, we'd have seen what you've written here, instead of the way the episode had it. For a few minutes there, when they both got rained on, and they started talking about Superman, I thought Lois had tumbled to Clark's secret-- what with the wet hair and all... But I forgot, he'd still have had his glasses on. I'm glad you had Lois go after him, instead of letting him leave. Nice job!! Feel like writing any more stories? ~Toc TicAndToc :o) ------ "I have six locks on my door all in a row. When I go out, I lock every other one. I figure no matter how long somebody stands there picking the locks, they are always locking three." -Elayne Boosler

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16839 10/28/04 10:14 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 111 Toronto dundan8 Hack from Nowheresville
dundan8 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 111 Toronto	I too totally agree, and Anne of Green Gables is also one of my favourite movies. Anyway, beautiful take on the episode, beatiful writing. Thumbs up!

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16840 10/29/04 09:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	That was soooo sweet, and soooo cute! See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK==> Barbarians in the Rain #16841 11/04/04 03:46 PM
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YellowDartVader Top Banana Y Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,133	Oh sorry I took so long to respond! Thanks for your comments . I am glad you enjoyed it. It was just a piece of waffy-gooeyness -- just the way I like my stories. Quote I believe now when you say you have a talent for WAFFYs... I believe what I said was that I have no talent writing anything other than happy, waffy, kissy scenes. Any attempt at anything heavier, and my mind starts to go crazy. Quote For a few minutes there, when they both got rained on, and they started talking about Superman, I thought Lois had tumbled to Clark's secret-- what with the wet hair and all... But I forgot, he'd still have had his glasses on. Oh, good point. I actually hadn't thought about that aspect at all. But, yeah, with the wet hair, maybe he did look a little like Superman. But maybe the hair was more down against his face than smoothed back -- picture Clark in ATAI in the pouring rain. I really see a lot of parallels between Anne and Gilbert's relationship and Lois and Clark's relationship -- but Lois didn't break any slates over Clark's head . Anne of Green Gables through Anne of the Island are (by far) my favorites books I've ever read, and the movies are my favorite movies -- ones I can watch over, and over, and over again. And, I mean it when I say that I make people watch the Anne of Green Gables movies with me (and listen to the books on tape when I drive places). Thanks for all of your wonderful comments. I am glad you liked it . - Laura Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive) "A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve

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