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He was trying to help her, wasn’t he? The above lines perfectly depict the emotion in the situation. Looking forward to part 2... 
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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Sounds like the subway I was on...
"I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher
"Fun will now commence" 7of9
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What a start for this story. You had me staring disbelievingly at the screen. I can't wait to read more.
Post again soon, please.
Sira.
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"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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OMG!!!!!!!!!! I want to read more please continue soonnnnnnnnnn Great start for a story More, more, soonnnnn 
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Well, after reading the comments, I couldn't resist finding out more. <g> Yikes! Saved in the nick of time. Edge of the seat start there, Wanda! Very dramatic and very well drawn - was easy to visualise what was happening on the page.  LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Hi, Very interesting start! Tonight had been very productive, despite her misgivings about venturing--alone--into a less-than-safe part of town. With her partner on vacation for Thanksgiving, she didn’t have much of a choice. Two reluctant sources had come forward with information, confirming a lead she’d been chasing all along. They had been eluding her all week, so when they finally agreed to meet with her, she wasn’t going to say no.
Still, she’d been all too aware of the dangers involved in venturing into the area at this time of night. There she’d been, a lovely, young, well-dressed woman wandering around in the middle of the night. She was propositioned twice during her brief two-block walk to the subway.  Is her partner is Clark? :rolleyes: At that time well dress they probably think is a prostitute. “*Hey!*” Ian shouted, upon entering the car. The man jerked his head upward at the sudden interruption. He’d been caught! Before the subway doors could close again, he bolted out the door. Ian rushed to the victim’s side.
“Hey lady,” he said, shaking her shoulders. She was completely unresponsive, but Ian could tell that she was breathing. The blouse under her jacket was torn open, leaving her bare and exposed. Ian tucked the jacket across the woman’s body. “Lady, wake up,” he tried again. Nothing.
Ian instinctively grabbed the handbag that was laying nearby. He took out a cell phone and dialed 9-1-1.
“Yes. My name is Ian Johnson. I’m calling from the G train, just past the Hyde Street stop. I just got on this train and there was a man trying to rape a woman. The man got away but the woman’s still on here unconscious... Her name? I don’t know,” Ian continued to search her bag, finally withdrawing her press pass. “Hold on, I found some I.D. Her name is Lois Lane. She works over at the Daily Planet.” OMG! Drug and almost rape.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Thanks for the feedback, FoLCs! I was really nervous about sharing this (and still am) because I wasn't sure how people would take the WHAM. However, I appreciate your support, and I am planning on releasing a part every three days if possible.
So... part two on Friday! That's not too far away, is it?
This has been over a year in the making. Pel is making a trailer, and I really wanted it to come out before the story as a teaser, but I also wanted to release the story around Thanksgiving, to be timely. So keep an eye out for a trailer sometime!
Thanks for commenting, but especially--Thanks for reading!
--Wanda
"He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.
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Excellent start Wanda and a shocking WHAM it was, but I'm OK with it if a little sad. Poor Lois, very traumatizing. Looking forward to more. ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Wow, this look like this is gonna be excellent. Poor Lois ! Looking forward to Friday ~Julia 
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(I know I'm late on the comments, sorry!!)
Wow, what a great start! Can't wait to read the rest.
Amanda
http://digital.net/~klane/LoisandClark.html
Lois Lane [referring to her underwear]: Do you like pink?
Superman: I like pink very much, Lois.
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