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FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17703 11/25/04 05:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow OP Pulitzer
OP Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Ooh, I just noticed this story being posted tonight. I love a good WHAM! I like seeing how characters have to deal with situations and the emotional rollercoaster that goes with it. Thank heavens for Ian. Clark is going to be beating himself up for a long time...hopefully he'll get over that as the story progresses. Thus ends my nighttime ramblings; I look forward to more! "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17704 11/25/04 06:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Wow! Nice Ellen Refreshing change Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17705 11/25/04 06:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA Psychofurball Columnist
Psychofurball Columnist Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA	Oh! This is going to be sad. Lois and clark are both going to blame thereselves. And what about lois, is her view on superman going to change? Hope to see the next part soon. Loved it! Rach Me: what are you looking at Snatches pic OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the chocolate isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17706 11/26/04 02:56 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Whoa! Very nicely done, Wanda. You've shown just enough of the horror so as not to creep people out totally but at the same time you haven't trivialised what happened. The hospital scenes are excellent - and it's so nice to see Ellen coming through for Lois. Clark's reaction when Perry told him was really good. I can so see him blaming himself for not being there when she needed him - and when the other victim was attacked, too. Poor Clark! Poor Lois! The red rose was a beautiful touch. And I was surprised - but went awww! - when I found out that Clark is Lois's emergency contact. Not her parents? That says a lot about her relationship with them as a rule. Oh, and I wonder how Ellen feels about not being her daughter's emergency contact? Really liking this so far, Wanda - post more soon! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17707 11/26/04 08:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Wow! Great part. Lois is going to need a lot help and emotional support. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17708 11/26/04 02:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Ohh I feel the free flowing guilt comin' on! Sweet gesture from Clark re: the rose..awwww! And Ellen is normal! I am happy to see her supporting Lois. ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17709 11/26/04 03:12 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Wanda, this is excellent. Clark's first reaction of "I should have been there to prevent this" is exactly what it should have been, and it's so typical of caring men. He won't believe that he's unable to prevent every bad thing from happening to Lois. I can just imagine Clark telling a therapist that he feels guilty because he should have been there, the therapist asks him if he thinks he's Superman, he answers "Yes," and he gets committed to a mental institution. I'm sure you won't go quite that far, but this kind of guilt is common and often misunderstood. I anticipate a very good story continuing to be very good. The only complaint I have about your posts is that they're too short! More, please, and quickly! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17710 11/27/04 06:26 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	This second part clearly keeps in line with its predecessor. It's great writing, great characterization. I can fully understand Lois feeling dirty even if the rape wasn't completed. And like the others, I just love Clark's reaction. I couldn't imagine it being any other way. Ellen is a big surprise here. Especially her remark concerning Lois and Clark's relationship. It's a refreshing change! I can't wait for the next part(s). Sira

Re: FDK: Hide and Seek, part 2 #17711 11/27/04 03:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Wanda I've just read the first two parts. This is excellent. Tricia

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