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FDK:Hide and Seek-Part 12 #19483 01/27/05 12:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Welcome Back! Very romantic. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:Hide and Seek-Part 12 #19484 01/27/05 01:26 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Wanda, I'm so glad to see this story back! (Okay, not that I've been around in the past couple of weeks to miss it but that's beside the point). Excellent, excellent part! I'm so glad that you didn't have Lois sulk and stay mad for ages; in the context of this story, you were so right. But this was a fantastic insight: Quote ‘If I was Super, and Clark was just a man... What if he only liked me as SuperLois? And as regular Lois, he acted like I didn’t exist?’ With that realization, her heart ached more than it ever had. Her eyes stung with tears as she sat there, contemplating in her dark bedroom. She racked her brain, thinking back on all of the times she’d ignored Clark, mooning instead over his alter-ego. “God, how it must have hurt,” Lois whispered aloud. ‘If he loves me like he says he does...’ Lois putting herself in Clark's shoes, and in such an apposite way, is a perfect way to make her see the reality of the situation. Just brilliant! I was also delighted to see her remembering Clark being there for her every step of the way since she was attacked. And, as Maria said, this ended very romantically indeed. Lovely! So what happens next? They have to catch the rapist, of course. Only three more parts! Hope you won't need so long with the next section! Wendy (who will get to work on Wanda's GEing ASAP...) Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK:Hide and Seek-Part 12 #19485 01/28/05 12:32 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	Hi Welcome Back!!! I love this story, that is not a secret and I am so happy you are back. I love this part,very romantic Great and hope to read the next part soon. Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK:Hide and Seek-Part 12 #19486 01/28/05 10:57 PM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	You came back!!! I missed so much! And what a wonderful part! I loved that Lois forgave Clark and understood your situation. After all, Clark were by her side right since the beginning, supporting, protecting and loving her. I'm looking forward to see what it happens next. Don't take so long, please!!! Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK:Hide and Seek-Part 12 #19487 01/29/05 11:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Wanda I'm glad to see you posting again. Please post more soon. Tricia

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