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#21647 05/05/05 02:58 AM
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Hi

Tomatoes goes here...
All kind of FDK is welcomed but please don´t use eggs or any kind of weapons. smile1

Karla

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That was cute, Karla - I was a little confused at the start when they were shouting Superman, which was his name, but then the conversation between the reporters and our hero began discussing Superman as quite obviously someone else entirely.

But it was only a few paragraphs on from that, that you explained that one, so it didn't matter to me too much. I'm one of those readers who doesn't mind being confused at some point in a story, so long as the confusion is cleared up at some point before the end and you did that just fine. smile

Anyway thumbsup

LabRat smile



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Aramis: Yes, sorry.
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#21649 05/05/05 03:10 AM
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I have to agree with Labby about being a bit confused.

Apart from that, it was cute!!! smile

Keep writing! thumbsup

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#21650 05/05/05 06:44 AM
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Very cute Karla!


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#21651 05/05/05 11:25 AM
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Yes, very cute! drool


Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.

Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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I liked it.

#21653 05/05/05 01:13 PM
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Hey Karla wave

Great to see you writing. I was confused too, but the rest i liked.

Carl Kent is a good name for clark's son. laugh

Keep 'black' writing wink

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#21654 05/05/05 02:36 PM
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Hi

Thank you peep

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No, no, no, no! Don't change it, the 'confusing' part was the fun part! goofy

If you take that away it's just another little next-gen story. Nice, but it wouldn't put a grin on my face!


Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.

Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
#21656 05/06/05 01:14 AM
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ok... Your wish is my ...well you know goofy Xanabee.
Thank you laugh

Karla


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