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FDK: My Everything #21816 05/11/05 03:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam OP Pulitzer
OP ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Thank you, Anna! Loved seeing Lois come to her senses and belatedly realize what she'd done to Clark... and brushing off Superman... and first calling then visiting Clark... <sigh> So sweet. Great line about how it probably won't take that long for her to fall in love with him... Great way to start my day! PJ

Re: FDK: My Everything #21817 05/11/05 03:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,099 Chatellerault, France, Europea... Kaethel Top Banana
Kaethel Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,099 Chatellerault, France, Europea...	You know I enjoyed this very much, Anna. I loved Lois dropping by Clark's place and taking the conversation right where they'd left it on the phone, with that "I can't". It was so Lois to expect Clark to catch up right away. And I adored her revealing to Clark (and to herself) that he's more than a best friend. The end was perfect, too. Loved it! Kaethel - I'm your partner. I'm your friend. - Is that what we are? - Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are. ~ Rick Castle and Kate Beckett ~ Knockout ~

Re: FDK: My Everything #21818 05/11/05 05:44 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Awww! Lovely, Anna! Very nicely done. The title is perfect. I loved seeing it make sense when Lois told Clark that he was everything to her. So good that the penny dropped and she realised how important he was to her before she did anything irrevocable, isn't it? And I agree with Pam: great last line! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK: My Everything #21819 05/11/05 05:49 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Beautiful Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: My Everything #21820 05/11/05 06:18 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	very sweet! Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: My Everything #21821 05/11/05 07:13 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Okay... I shouldnt be the one saying this, once I totally LOVE the way BatP is in the original version but... MDL. "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK: My Everything #21822 05/11/05 01:36 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Wow! Superb! If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK: My Everything #21823 05/11/05 02:50 PM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	I love it The last part took my breath away Please write more, I dont like this story to end like that Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: FDK: My Everything #21824 05/11/05 09:41 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Anna A lovely story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia

Re: FDK: My Everything #21825 05/12/05 09:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Thanks for the nice feedback, FoLCs!! I haven't written fanfic in so long I had almost forgotten what it felt like! Wendy: Quote The title is perfect. I forgot to mention it was Kaethel's idea MDL: If it makes you feel better, no, Lex doesn't die in this version Karla: Quote Please write more, I dont like this story to end like that I can promise nothing. But I'll keep this suggestion in mind Thanks again for your comments! (And, of course, more comments are always welcome!) See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: My Everything #21826 05/13/05 07:41 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow What a story!! It pulled my heartstrings, seeing Lois fret over Clark's emotional wellbeing. It was beautiful and sweeeeeeet!! I always felt so bad for Clark in that scene, so this story is so nice, for Lois to see the moment in retrospect and see the anguish in Clark's eyes that was so obvious if only she'd really looked... or paid attention... or allowed herself to see it. Brilliant that you decided to write a story about that!!! ~Nicole

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