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Hi,

Great part. hyper More ASAP, please.

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He has to do something! anything! he will I am sure. More soon. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Right about now would be a good time for original Clark to get through to alt-Clark on a two-way link and guide him on this rescue. And having an experienced superhero listening in on the resulting press feeding frenzy might not be a bad thing, either.


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Loved this part smile

The little sequence where Lois tried to get Clark an excuse to leave was a lovely touch.

And can I just say, I think you're the first person I've ever seen literally use a computer (well, a constituent part at least) as an assault weapon smile I was cracking up at that!


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Many thanks for your feedback, sorry for the shortness of my reply, and part 16 will be up shortly.

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I love the indecision! I bet Lois will help him out.

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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